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Athidi Sketchbook II

Wow looking good.Great work!!!

Had a lot of time today to have fun with zbrush…
I tried to go for a comic book style character… Ive never done anything like this before, and thought it might be fun to try…

Its still early wip…
Tell me what you think…

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I don’t know why, but her upper body looks really awkward. good job on everything else though.

It´s a very nice catwoman, Like Tyron say, something looks wrong with the upper body, I think it´s the navel do much of that, it´s to far down and her ribs should curve different from her hips and up.

I don’t think the upper body is awkward, but it does seems that the forearm is a bit too long, which is distorting the proportion and the overall silhouette of the model.

fake boobs are nice in real life, but ideally you can make them a bit more natural in 3d. They are also a bit too close to each other even when the suit is suppose to be squeezing them.

try to have a second look on how the suit contacts the skin, especially on the area around the boobs where the suit is suppose to be squeezing them. There is no way in real life where the suit will be skin tide with the bottom and the side of the boobs. I am pretty sure you will notice that even without me telling you, but it’s safe to remind you that :smiley:

shoulders maybe a bit too wide for a woman, but it’s acceptable.

nice wip. Can’t wait to see more :smiley:

Torso and forearms are both very long, also the torso looks like its leaning forwards. Long neck too.

Your details all look fine but your proportions need some work.

I want to thank you guys, especially piggy, for great critique. I didn’t expect this thorough critique on zbrush central… Its so great, and I am so very excited to work some more on the model after all the things you guys pointed out. :slight_smile:

Ive made a small check list of the things you guys were addressing.

Again… Just so you guys know, I really appreciate the critique! :slight_smile: Ill try to get some work done on her now…

Check length of forearms and upper arms.
Check position of navel.
Make more natural boobs.
Make distance between boobs longer.
Second look on how the suit contacts the skin
Maybe make hips more extreme, to get more loony feeling.

Ive been working on some of the issues…
Worked on the breasts, and the proportions in general…
Hope Ive pleased you all :slight_smile: I might have gone blind looking at her now… So please give me feedback :slight_smile: thank you…

oh, and I have lowered the head, fixed the forearm, worked on the hip, added more details to the knees, moved the navel, and started sculpting a few folds… Not exactly high detail yet. :slight_smile:

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I like the edits, I totally agree with piggys statement about the breasts. Id move the front facing part of the triceps towards the pecs a bit more to create more of an overhang. The armpit is a bit full, cut it in a bit and define the tail of the pecs. Also, about the hips, they don’t seem to pretrude that far forward, I should say they protrude more towards the posterior. The begining part of the illiac crest I believe. I really like the sculpt so far, I have a terrible time with women and you’re doing it well. Keep it up.

Fine work

Here’s BTW the “finished” work of Catwoman, When I look back at the wip, I cant really believe how blind I was… :smiley:

I was really disappointed how I didn’t see how strange the model looked earlier… :stuck_out_tongue: live to learn I guess :slight_smile: I think embarrassed is the word I’m looking for… hehe

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Don’t be embarrassed. I struggle constantly with trusting my own eye. Sometimes it takes months before I realize how bad my work is. That’s why you post in the forums, so you can get that fresh eye and a new perspective. Your sculpts look great!

Thanks for those words Ravis :slight_smile:
here is my latest development as a artist, I feel I keep getting better. :slight_smile:

its a lord of the rings inspired orc, still wip though. I really want to finish this one with a nice render in max… :slight_smile:

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cool sculpt

Looks sweet.
Be nice to see some damage like small cuts or scares on the Ork.

thanks guys :slight_smile: Ive added a scar, Ill come with an update soon :slight_smile: