Thanks for the suggestions PJC, the skin on her face is supposed to look pale like a vampire. I do need to make her hands a little more pale I guess to match will see if I have time. Here is another pose of her let me know if it looks better.
the first pose just needed more flare with the hip and assyemtry in the arms, the second pose i tried to do that, and it wasn’t natural, is you want her legs like that then her upper body needs to arch forward. if you want her to have her back straight, then her whole body needs to move forward so her left thigh is close to verticle. again, the arms need to be different. i drew a few suggestions. on either pose, if she was just grabbing one of the guns or reaching for it.
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Well I decided to do the ending scene of the movie when Saleen and Marcus have their final battle. So I had to build Marcus in order to make the scene more realistic, rather than just using a stand in. So here he is let me know what you think and if you want to see other views.
great work i really enjoy your wip many inspirating things in it 
keep it up