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Need a crit on a famous face

Looks great Craig!

I’d have to get really picky to critique but I’ll go for it. Keep in mind I havent stared at Lea lately.

Add some fuzz to the hair at the top of the head its really “hard” at the middle top.

Eyebrows look somewhat painted on maybe add some finer details to them like seperation between the hairs.

Overall its badazz. Muzzle smoke??

Cool- it looks like the zbrush Gods have shined down on me and my last image is now on the first page- thank you :slight_smile:

Eonsuu- thank you
Cindigirl- Good question. Actually, I do like Star Wars, but this was the first time I know of that I did any Star Wars related art (even as a kid, I don’t remember ever drawing the characters… I’m a much bigger Super Hero fan). I picked Leia because I didn’t have any females on my demo reel, and I think she is a highly recognizable person. I did spend a ton of time working on this project, but I went in with little knowledge of what really Leia looked like. I think it shows in the wip- it took a long time to get the face down. I know your question was mostly a joke- but in truth, I haven’t gotten tired of this piece yet.

Steve- thank you for your encouragement. This is a pretty simple render- just Maya for mental ray with Mental ray area lights. I love the look of a good FG render and/or Global Illum… but I personally didn’t want to wait forever for my renders. I used SSS for the arms/head, anisotropic for the belt, blinn with fractals for the metal, the eye reflection is a environment reflection map- most everything is pretty simple. I did as you said- played with the settings and got something workable out of them. Glad you liked the piece- good to hear from you again.

abnoid- I like these suggestions- I will see about doing some edits.

John Strieder- thank you

Yes Craig!!! You are in the Top Row!!! Fantastic Man!!! You deserved this Aknowledgment!!! Bravo! :+1: :sunglasses: :+1:

good work

Great piece…the amount of detail you put in your work always amazes me. Congrats in making it to the top row.

Eddie C.

Well done Craig, this lookd great. Modeling, texturing, shading all top notch. Well deserved top row. :+1:

Ive watched you throughout this thread and would like to offer my congrats for a great final.You deserve your top row :slight_smile: well done ,cal

Well done, your hard work has paid off. Top row and rightly so. :wink:

you made it to top row!! great job mate!

THE HEAD is BIG

Okay- just another small edit. I’m getting to a place where I feel good about this work. Please let me know if you have a critique.

thank you piz, kikoni, DECLOAK, pap87, calum5ZB, tez, nerveink

Dimka_D- CRAP! now you tell me! :). Actually- I’ll take another look at the proportion. Please keep in mind- Carrie’s body to head ratio is something I considered when making this model… and while her head isn’t meant to be huge, she leans towards the larger head to body.:slight_smile:

Okay- so a couple of things- a high rez image with some minor updates, and my wireframe as it appears before displacement in Maya:

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Very Nice Craig! And… very clear wireframe and very good polys distribution. :+1: :sunglasses:

Dimka needs a cyber z brush slap across the face. Enough of the lazy ill informed one line crits. This is a stunning example of work and I have enjoyed watching its development.

Not to be disrespectfull or anything, but she kinda looks like Vin Diesel.

omg she looks like vin diesel ??? ar u serious with that comment. i guess everyone who has completed a scene or good character wouldnt write down such a dumb comment. As for me i must say everythings perfect exept for the guns which to me still seem too slim. congrats to ur top row and happy happy zbrushing

Disco Stu- Are you talking about the handle, or the barrell, or both? My reference on the gun was limited… and I kind of thought the handle was thin too. As for Vin Diesel- no disrespect taken:D . Thank you for the critiques- they are always helpful.

Craig

I thickened the butt of the gun- after double checking it, I think DiscoStu was right. I did double check the head proportion to the body- and I’m still sticking with what I had. All I can say is that she is a woman who is proportioned more like a smaller person (larger head to body) and not like an amazon (smaller head to body).

Thank you for all of your crits and putting up with these tiny edits. :slight_smile:

Dude that is awsome, i would love to see how you made that eye texture.

a good work

give me a little while and I’ll post something later. Most everything I did is simple- but if there are other parts that need explanation let me know and i’ll give it a shot if there is time.

Craig