Hey dude!
I like the gun design! I also like the model from the breasts to the hood.
It still unsettles me the inner ties and leg structure, specially the inner side of the right leg.
The cloth in the hood are great but not so much in the sleeves.
Swords are ok. You could have add same leather in the grip. It would contrast a bit to with the metal material.
minor detail, belly button could be more deeper.
In my opinion, hand are very important. The pose of the hands in a image can tell a lot about the all image. Your model is holding two swords that possibly are heavy stuff. I would positioned her fingers like she was grabbing the swords like it was some heavy weapon.
But great work mate.