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Gustavo´s Sketchbook (some nudity)

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#41

Poly paint…

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#42

someone needs a spray tan… :cool:

#43

The crotch area needs to be widened/flattened…
Kinda look’s like (s)He’s got some junk down there, you know what I’m saying? :o

otherwise the figure looks good

#44

I’m not sure if I should be critiqing at all, since your women sculpts seem to be better than mine, but there is just one thing that I have to say you’re making a mistake on. The mons pubis is just way too long. Its obvious in your previous pictures, but the high-thigh panties just accentuate the problem. I’ve seen this in a lot of people’s work, drawings and 3d, including my own at times. In my case I can only plead that it can be hard to sculpt accurately between the legs, but in a lot of cases I think that people tend to forget that women’s stuff is tucked directly underneath where you really can’t see. Its really easier to get a peek at from the back.

#45

i think its better now…

thanks guys for the tips on this body…critiques always welcome in this situations, update

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#46

It is better.

But that area still doesn’t look right. Stoob must have posted while I was still typing, but I see what he’s saying now. The whole pelvic angle was too long and narrow. Its not as long now, and maybe you don’t need to reduce it now, but its still too narrow. It would look more natural if you took the cross-section of the upper thigh more into account.

The front of the upper thigh connects to the arch of the pelvis, the Illium. A tendon runs down the front of the leg connecting the main mucle groups that extend the let, and another runs from the same place to the back of the knee, seperating the mucles of the front of the leg from the mucles and fat of the inner thigh. As a result the leg is more pointed towards the front, and there’s more room between them, where they connect to the body at the hip than there is directly under the crotch.

If you take that into account I think the triangle of the crotch will have a much less acute angle.

I also think you should have taken the advice on the position of the navel from klausknuth’s draw-over.

I wish I could get more draw-overs like that.

#47

Well, if I want draw-overs I guess I should be willing to share my perspective on other’s work the same way.

Here’s how I see the anatomy:

White indicates the pelvic bone, mucles and outlines as I would expect to find them. Green indicates contours I would expect to find. The curved lines on the legs are meant to indicate the kind of cross-section I talked about in my last post.

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#48

Damn, you guys are fast :wink:
And I like what I see…
I like the progress and I think one more update and we can talk about ‘finetuning’; if you like :wink: . Even females that are in a good shape have more bodyfat them men in the same condition. We don’t know what bodytype you are after, so we speek of a general, ‘prototype’. Steven Stahlberg told us everytime that the navel area and the buttom are have to be perfectly rounded and even. Hey, I see you are fom Brasil!! :wink: Reference is really impertant! And it’s important to take you time to watch! I remember my old mentor at art classes: he did let us draw bottles every now and than for proportion reasons. And he always told us:“You’ve drawn a bottle, but not THIS bottle in front of you!” ;(

Watch closely at you reference and keep it going, you are not far from it…

Klaus
:slight_smile:
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#49

thanks again wildsketch and klausknuth for the tips and over paint…i think now i get the right proportions!!!

thanks buds

the update

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#50

its looking good man, alot of progress since yesterday!
i did a quick draw over of a few places i thought could use some work. her navel needs a slight fold i think, and the hips are a little too big, ipainted over those a bit to slim her down somewhat. keep it up!

[[attach=90036]fem copy.jpg[/attach]](javascript:zb_insimg(‘90036’,‘fem copy.jpg’,1,0))

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#51

Thanks mdale13…i will do that soon with texture and mental ray lightining

another wip …thor!

[thor.jpg](javascript:zb_insimg(‘90086’,‘thor.jpg’,1,0))

#52

Final image from female torso…hope you like! :smiley:

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#53

Eh?..you seem to have some crazy spray cheese thing goin on.

#54

I think the final torso represents a significant improvement. Thanks for taking our suggestions. Good work. :+1:

#55

…dito :+1:

Best
Klaus:)

#56

Thanks buds!!! Soon i will post more updates on THOR, so far here is a job for my boss, priston tale caracther…

[[attach=90182]pristontalecaracter.jpg[/attach]]pristontalecaracter.jpg

#57

more updates on thor

[ZBrush-Document5.jpg](javascript:zb_insimg(‘90186’,‘ZBrush-Document34.jpg’,1,0))

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#58

Here zoom picture of my new project…

scottish cavalry…

[ZBrush-Document.jpg](javascript:zb_insimg(‘91124’,‘ZBrush-Document.jpg’,1,0))

#59

Hey guys…my scottish rider is in 70% done…this another preview…soon i will post everything …hope you like
other week i will begin the details.

[Untitled-1.jpg](javascript:zb_insimg(‘91377’,‘Untitled-1.jpg’,1,0))