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    Smile girl in livingroom (nudity)

    hi everyone

    this is my lastwork , girl in livingroom, i model the girl model use zbrush4 and render in lighttwave ,use the Plugins of sasquatch, for the room model that is render in max use vray hope you like it .

    comment are well come , happy new years!!!

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    It looks really good but I think that there is way too much chromatic aberration going on ... ( coming from a guy who loves chromatic aberration )

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    may be will add the cloth later, but in my eyes it is just art , nothing no more.

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    I think she is an absolute outstanding model in every aspect. extremely natural and she clearly got personality. looks like the portrait of a specific person. mind telling us what your reference was?
    no need to dress her. I like the contrast between that heavy decorated opulent room and her simple natural nudity.

    that beeing said, I must agree on the chromatic aberration, which really hurts the image. too much, too sharp, too everything and it messes badly with her hair and is painful to watch on the floor.
    I'd probably play a bit more with the light and get it all a little softer.
    I understand the desire of rendering everything super crisp, to show off the detail work, but it doesn't really help the image and her gentle charisma to breath naturally, so to speak

    other than that - great work.

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    +1 for the chromatic aberration: way too visible, also i gues there was some sharpening added to it...
    if you could tone that down, it would look way more convincing..
    very good render either way, nice environment too

    im sure if you fix those little exess, it will easily get top raw

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    to Julian_K

    the hair setup and rendering in lightwave is very hard work , but it still could be better, thanks your comment!! i agree with you.

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    amazing figure sculpting and subtleties around the torso and hands as well,
    would love to see real hair coming out of the model but its very good photo texture i applaud you on that, i also agree on the chromatic aberration, great rendering and lighting skills

    my thread
    http://www.zbrushcentral.com/showthread.php?p=765318&posted=1#post765318

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    not sure if its just me .. but theres something creepy about this...
    http://shadowship.blogspot.com/

    older galleries: http://pushinpixals.blogspot.co.uk/

    a whoosh and twinkle is better than a sizzle and splat

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    It looks like the Full Body scan from Artec-Group - http://www.artec3d.com/gallery/3d-models/

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    If so you really should quote your sources. It would be interesting to see the wireframe.

    Also it's not really a great idea to rely heavily on face projection to much.
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    I cant read this correct, but i think there is something wrong with the proportions of the head...
    Its one idea bigger than it should be.... i think.
    Or i get this feeling from the "photoshop" like effect that is going on there. The face looks like montage over the body ?!
    And those "artefacts", that look like cheap porn tape from the 60's, or its stereoscopic effect ? i dunno, but they ruin the whole work, for me!
    The enviroment is really nice! Nice light and materials...
    But, the way i see it you projected the face texture from a picture from this angle and matched it so...
    or it is painted from all angles ? - if so, maybe try different angle of the body to get the proportions right, because now the head looks bigger - if its not really bigger... but seeing your modeling skils i believe that its ok, so its from the strange angle ?!

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    she looks like Tina Fey. But yeah, I agree with everyone else abut the CA. It's very distracting. Aside from that, great model and scene.

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    I Liked very much of this work!
    Congratulations!

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    The head feels too large. I would look at that again.

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    Cheater!!!
    ALTAlexandre Troufanov

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aliasfx
    Cheater!!!
    It's not a matter of cheating. ZhiHeng Tang just wasn't honest about the source of the material used, which is a shame.
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