Laurie's sketchbook

[laurie]

Here's something I finished up today.

Let me know what you think.

[laurie]

You can see more detail without the depth of field.

[unstoppablex]

Looks pretty good, what I'd recommend on changing is adjusting proportions so it looks more like a human face(unless your going for an alien type head). Also just sharping some edges of the face, for example the triangle right under the eyes seems uneven for a metal surface. Where the eyebrows are I think you need to smooth out the curve. maybe also adding a low opacity red rgb value just around the eyes so the red isn't so sharply defined.

other then that it looks great, i like the sharp edges on the top of his head and his nose structure.

[laurie]

Hey thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate the valuable feedback. I was going for the alien look. I'll put up an updated image soon.

Thanks again.

[laurie]

A few updated versions. What do you think???

Cheers

[laurie]

What do you think? Your feedback is welcome.

[bohemond]

It's a good starting point
Eyes are too big though

[laurie]

Thanks for the feed back.

I will adjust the eyes and post it.

[laurie]

Updated a few features:- Shrunk the eyes a little and narrowed the cheek bones.

Let me know your thoughts.

Thanks.

[laurie]

An ugly old ear, not anatomically correct but just a fun rendering.

[ajv3d]

I just came across this thread, I like your work, that's a pretty disgusting ear, but it's awesome! How did you decide to render this?

[cw06]

-this is really cool!
...and gross

[Eiad]

OMG this looks awesome. What rendering engine did you use?

[laurie]

I used mental ray in Maya for this render. Thanks for the positive feedback.

[Framedworld]

That head's planes are a bit off. But that ear is pretty cool