Laurie's sketchbook

[laurie]

I know what you are saying about the planes on the head. I'm going to give it another look to refine that head.

[laurie]

Upper body sculpt. I'm trying to improve my anatomy, so any feedback would be really valuable.

Thanks.

[Fenrir406]

I dont know much about anatomy but I think that your upper body torso looks good. The only thing that might not be right is the abs, I think they may need to be reshaped a little bit.

[3D-User]

i agree. i think the abs need to have more [width]
and the belly botton is to small and try to bulk out the ribcage and the nipels need some work
Keep up the good work

[laurie]

Thanks for the feedback. Its good to have some fresh eyes for some input.

Cheers.

[laurie]

What do you think? I'm still trying to improve my anatomy and how I translate the shapes of the body into my sculpts.

[d100763]

I really dig the bronze female sculpt, reminds me of the one in the psychologist's office in Sopranos...the ear is a bit too realistic for my taste...

[laurie]

Thanks for the feedback.

I have uploaded a turntable of that bronze female sculpt at:-

http://www.maneuver.co.uk/images/fig...ntable_web.mov (1.1mb)

Check it out.

[3D-User]

very Cool turntable I like it
but mybe smoth out the stateu a litel
great poseing by the way

check out my torso work at http://www.zbrushcentral.com/showthread.php?t=150305

[laurie]

I have smoothed out the figure study and put up a turn table at:-
http://maneuver.co.uk/turntables/smo...rntable_2.html

Let me know what you think.

[3D-User]

i find it looks alot betters this way and i like the turntable. very nice

thanks for the comment on my model i have a girl model but im not showing it untel the head is done

i like your sculpts

[laurie]

Hand sculpt. Its not perfect. Found it hard to get a good shape/form for the palm and the fingers/thumb.

Any ideas on how to improve this would be great.

Thanks

[laurie]

This is still in progress.

Would be great to get some critique and feedback on it.

Thanks

[3D-User]

very nice haed model sorry for not ansering you on the hand model i did not see the post

but as for the hand model very nicey done but some flaws like on the palm of the hand

the lines of the palm is very off but great modeling

[laurie]

Cool thanks for the feed back.

Much appreciated.