Abhishek's sketchbook

[asecbrush]

I think the knees and ankles are too narrow from the front view.
Also the jaw-angle could be sharper, not that rounded.
The feet need some attention too. Try to sculpt the plane changes that go on there.

Have fun ...

[basantjoshi]

awesome work ....keep posting .....

[robertrageson]

i like how clean it is and defined. i think the bottom of the knee may need to be a little smoother transition to the shin, to me it looks like it comes to too much of a triangle. and the back of the knee looks a little off, the V shape at the top of the calf muscles could be a little higher. i could be wrong though.

[Derek Frenzo]

Looks good. Very "Ahnold" like.

[abhishekshs]

hey guyz! thank u all for the many replies! i value all feedback as i can learn more every day

moonlitmaverick: thanks man, so glad u like it. !

GX@W: thank you! u are absolutely correct about external oblique will smooth it out.... working hard on that and having a tough time getting it right especially hand and feet

artstudio3: thanks alot!

asecbrush: thanks man for the feedback! i will take care of teh points u mentioned....thanks alot!

basantjoshi: thanks bro!

robertrageson: glad u like it! will definitely work on teh points u mentioned, thank u!

Derek Frenzo: thanks man!

[abhishekshs]

hi again,
just started a new male sculpt... will post the body updates very soon.
feel free to add comments or critics.

[abhishekshs]

another update...

[asecbrush]

Looking great!
Beautifully clean sculpt.

The abdomen and serratus/obliques could use a bit more attention IMO.
And if at the end you could add some asymmetry to the face and e.g. abdomen, that would add a lot of realism.

Edit : Oh, and the ears seem a bit flat if I'm not mistaken.

Edit 2 : The arms look a bit too short, but that might be because of the angle of he arms.

Edit 3 : (I can't stop ) : it also seems to me that the hands are too small.
(Especially for such an athletic person.)
When an adult covers his face with his hand, then it +/- covers the face from chin to hairline ( +/- 18 cm ).
If I remember correctly, an adult head is about 20 to 23 cm high, so you can use those proportions as a reference.

Of course, these are just guidelines, every person is different.
Hope this helps.

Happy ZBrushing,
Dominiek.

[abhishekshs]

asecbrush- hey man, thanks alot for the feedback.... will definitely
check the proportion of arms and hands and m planning to try some clothes
on this guy, so i m not going for a detailed torso... just sculpted the basic details and u r absolutely correct about obliques, i always struggle there
will try to do better next time.... thanks again!

[abhishekshs]

hi guyz,
currently i m working on a sculpture of kratos from god of war.i saw some awesome sculptures of kratos on net and i get inspired by Mark newman's sculpt...so i m making a attempt to create a sculpture of kratos...i finished the base mesh in maya and took the mesh in zbrush for sculpting, started to tweak the head first and trying to achieve likeness...

herez what i have so far. will try to post the updates asap..i would like to get some constructive criticism frm other helpful artists here..

[abhishekshs]

herez a another update... he is still in t-pose, just trying to sculpt the basic details before posing him... i need ur feedback to improve my process please!

[abhishekshs]

i have started working on a new male model to improve my anatomy skills sculpting of this guy is in progress.. still a long way to go..

[Heist]

What brush was use to make the bread on his face?

[abhishekshs]

hello guyz, here is the wip of my new model...your comments would be highly appreciated...

[SixxPixels]

This looks great....
Is the left hand bigger than the right?
I would take the Brachioradialis and have it flow down to the inside of the palm...just a little more than what you have... or better yet; rotate the Forearm a little more towards the body.

Great Mesh!