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    I like the touch of your most recent female figure, although I cannot help but think that the breast are too high up to the clavical.
    Unless she'd have had a significant boob job and lift, I would be of the inclination that gravity would pull them down more level to where the sternum is.
    If the sculpt was made to significantly exaggerate the female figure, then what I think could go out of the window as to a proper crit.

    She also could use a tad more lower rib cage, maybe..
    Last edited by koro; 10-26-11 at 02:55 AM.

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    Tell me if the anatomy is correct guys ..thks..or your suggest..thank you..

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    Nice studies!
    Happy ZBrushing! Greetings, Dominiek.
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    your version 4 sculpt of your female version have very nice flow to it. it is a bit toony but i guess thats your intention with the super hero theme. i noticed you had some trouble in getting her side views to be more slim. down below is an image which could help get a feel for that particular problem.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jesper Rytter View Post
    your version 4 sculpt of your female version have very nice flow to it. it is a bit toony but i guess thats your intention with the super hero theme. i noticed you had some trouble in getting her side views to be more slim. down below is an image which could help get a feel for that particular problem.
    Thanks Jesper for tips...i will get intetion to the next time, sure...when i come back and saw my femal sculpt i found plenty of mistake or too exagered form..(as you said it comes from my hero theme.) in one side i try to improve my anatomy knowledge, and i must sculpt as realistic as possible...in other side i want to continue my cartoon Hero theme... and due to my self responsability i go to work i try to catch time for make all of this...but thanks guys for all your support..it give us always the motivation.
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    Ok guys...i continue to inprove my anatomy skill...Hope she is improving related to previous version..What do you think ?

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    Very nice update.. I really like the proportion of this version!

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    Quote Originally Posted by SolidSnakexxx View Post
    Very nice update.. I really like the proportion of this version!
    Thank you.
    Consider that i didnt go into fine detail ..
    Last edited by tuff; 01-25-12 at 10:05 AM.

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    I like how this looks (and your previous studies btw) if i could offer a little critique though, i feel like her breasts look like somebody is grabbing them and pulling them outward (away from one another) as opposed to them sagging naturally. They look nice from the profile (the outside of the breasts) but on the inside the seem a little too "bent"? Again i really like how its looking and this is just a minor crit and my opinion. Keep up the good work!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Clintus Maximus View Post
    I like how this looks (and your previous studies btw) if i could offer a little critique though, i feel like her breasts look like somebody is grabbing them and pulling them outward (away from one another) as opposed to them sagging naturally. They look nice from the profile (the outside of the breasts) but on the inside the seem a little too "bent"? Again i really like how its looking and this is just a minor crit and my opinion. Keep up the good work!
    Thanks Clintus for your crits..all critics are welcome..

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    i quite like her proportions now. one thing though is her pose around the neck. it is not very relaxed. it is like she is pushing her head backwards. a relaxed neck is leaning very slightly forward. it is hard to say something about your upper body as the hair is hidding it. arms, legs, feet, butt and stomach are just lovely constructed

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    Ok guys....i update the woman anatomy.Considering the critiques , thks for that...beside my goal is to make her something like SuperHero Character too..With as the best muscle flow as i can.

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    great progress. Your are getting better with every update

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cral View Post
    great progress. Your are getting better with every update
    This is my goal and without your support i couldnt go better, thank you.

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    Hey, whatever happened to you? I (along with everyone else) we were loving what you were doing. Conan, what a classic. Hope to hear from you soon. Best.

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