The piece is off balance.... looks as if it might fall over. Other thoughts would definitely concern the wings and their soft blending right into the shoulders etc... Might think about doing a connection piece there - look at the way Ram horns have a bone 'o-ring' that encompasses the horn's extrusion. That is an idea....
The anatomy is okay - the trapezius (hind shoulder area) needs work - and it seems that you were just fumbling with a resort to sorting out the wing intersection issue.... but get that sorted.
I like the visual of a boney spine.
The Jaw does not hold enough mass as it pulls back to the ear. Might be the cheeks are a bit too sunken... dont know what approach you are going for... just overall tweaking on your anatomy.
It is a start that could turn into something nice - good luck. Oh and the wings obviously need love, but it is apparent that you are flushing out the main forms first...
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