Kirgan - sketchbook (nudity)

[RHedendahl]

Hi, have watch your guys work here at ZbrushCental for quite some time, extremely high quality forum.
I hope that you can give feedback on my work and help me get better at my modeling and sculpting skills.
Start with a post of work I've done and also the WiP I'm doing right now.

Old Lady:



New WiP, love some feedback on this one.

[RHedendahl]

New WiP model, concept by Dave Rapoza

[RHedendahl]

Did some changes to the old lady. Would love some replys aswell .

[cherub_rock]

Hey there! What's up?

Some nice work here. My favorite is the old lady, however, I'd make a better render of the eyes (or leave them out), they don't ad up to the quality of the face imo.

Cheers

[ivar_sn]

the old lady is coming out good...keep pushing it...
the eye area needs some more attention ...
And the nude female..... the legs need work...
keep sculpting ....... look at as many refernces you can get..

[Piggy]

lol that woman's legs are short...

that being said, it gives your character a more realistic approach by giving her short legs.. .not every woman has the body of those hollywood superstar... As long as that's your intention to make her legs short, then I would say you did a pretty nice job.... but if you were going to give her a more standard approach, then her legs will need to be a bit longer.

Otherwise the models are looking pretty good

[Disco Stu]

weird you got no posts for 2 weeks.
The girls face is looking very nice as do the breasts.
There maybe some twitchy proportions but thats maybe the perspective.
The old lady is also coming along nicely

[RHedendahl]

cherub_rock: thx for the reply, I agree with you on the eyes.
ivar_sn: Will work on those things.
Piggy: Will not the legs longer, She is meant to short and I also try to make her has natural has possible. But if you see anything else I would love to hear it.
Disco Stu: Thx. Yeah, thought it would be more comments when I posted. But it came now instead.
Which is great. Hopefully I will get some more of them also .

[Paint Guy]

A great start here! The old woman's face is amazingly realistic and IMO top row material with a little work like more realistic eyes.

The nude woman looks very well proportioned. IMO I wouldn't change the leg length or anything else, except the hands look a little blobby and could use some definition like adding knuckles and bones on the top of the hands. The hair also needs work but I think you probably know that and still have to finish it. Great work though!

[RHedendahl]

Paint Guy: Thanks man, and I agree with you on the things you comment on.

Here is an update on the old lady, worked on the eyes. Still have some texture work to do.

[Santis]

Tjena Kirgan!
Glad to find you here
The old lady is coming along nicely, looking forward to see it finished!

[adampof]

love the old lady model

[RHedendahl]

Thx both of you, here is the finished model:

[RHedendahl]

Quick sculpt:

[hunterk]

The Jack Nicholson quick sketch looks good so far. You should keep it going and refine it. Good work, you are getting better and better each time you post here.