Obbi's Sketchbook - 2009

[-Storm-]

I like this bust, great attitude, I especially like the sideview
One thing though about the latest image, I think the stubbles look a bit to big, maybe make them smaller?
Keep it up

[oneigekko]

Some stuff i'd fix

The bottom of his nose should transition to the face much smoother. It's incorrect now and pretty distracting.

The end of his bottom lip and the end of his mouth seem to be in 2 different places. the lip should end where the mouth ends. Right now the lip ends but then his mouth line continues downward way beyond where his lip ends.

The line going up the side of his brow is a little weird too.

cool expression and wrinkle detail.

[MarakSan]

Thats one freaki lookin woman

[tokio]

great work

// if you play the role playing game such as DQ ,FF before..
i must to say "Level up now"

[Nattawat_OBBI]

EDIT: Updated I think that should be updated the mouth and forehead

[Nattawat_OBBI]

update and some test renders.

[Santis]

Woaw, I totally missed your last updates!
Great stuff as always, looking forward to more

[Captain Sensible]

Nice work Obbi! The bust is coming along well

[Nattawat_OBBI]

Santis/ Captain Sensible... thank you so much everyone for the feed back.

Hi all I finished my Africa,Tribesmen project and Modelling in Zbrush, Texturing in PS. Hope you like it.

[Santis]

African? Really? Dude, this is some alien-tribal-egghead you got going.. I don't think you do yourself a favor by entitling your bust as such, nor in taking such artistic license (unjustified) - try using references next time...
and one last thing, this may be just my pet-peeve, but minor tweaks shouldn't really qualify as updates, try and wow us with something you sweated out, spare us the 'here's another shot from another angle with another shader tweak' sort of posts... sorry if that was harsh, but you're getting too many replies going 'cool' for your own good... good luck, -g

This is his sketchbook and it's up to him how often he wants to update.
If you don't like it, ignore it, at least give him some constructive crits, that was unnecessarily destructive, in my opinion.

[max-tx]

Amazing work my friend, congratulations!!!

[Stefanuto]

Very well done my friend, Is very good your work!!! Congratulations!!! A big hug!!!



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[VinceRizzi]

I agree with santis, guringo's comments are detructive and unnecessary. Sometimes people on these forums forget that this is ART. If he wants the head to look that way then so be it, that's his choice. If you wanna see scientific hyper realistic accuracy then go buy a medical book and stare at that. And posting "minor tweaks" is interesting to a lot of people, including myself. Good job on the bust!

[tokio]

Hi my friend Great job on the bust !!

[Nattawat_OBBI]