Jorge Lescale's sketchbook (some nudity) video added 9/2/09

[Kwamey]

I think you can keep that idea for that pose, but maybe correct some details... If you hide her legs with your hands, she seems so still and relax having interest in one direction, then remove your hands and you suddently see her legs running to an impossible direction, at 90 degres ! lol it definately has something to do with her waist and right foot rotation, and for finning, maybe her facial expression wich should give more the impression that she's in a such position. I love the model, she deserves a nicer pose hehe.

[robbiestyle]

hey Jorge. the model itself is looking great. there's nothing wrong with the idea of your pose, it's just that that you haven't executed it all the way yet. the girl can look pretty and still look like she is in action. if you cover her top half and look at just the waist, you have the beginnings of a cool running pose. if you cover her lower body and just look at the top, you have a very relaxed looking pose (not even looking at the face) the two aren't talking to each other right now. This is also a great opportunity to use all the gear and dangling parts to help sell the action. those feathers off the axe can be trailing behind the axe to show the directional motion of it. the straps can be lagging behind her and loosened to show shes coming down in mid stride. That cloth hanging from her waist should definitely be flapping around. well that's enough outta me. I can't wait to see how you finish off man. You've got something really good here. adios!

roberto

[deep]

Holly Odin

Another wonderful sculpture Jorge
only thing bothering me is her hair i dont know exactly whats wrong with it but its not at the same level with the rest of the sculpture. But yet she is WONDERFUL right now i m really craving for a viking lady

If its possible can you post a high-res render of final pose without texture or paint, i really like to see her in a form of clay sculpt

thx for sharing your wonderful art work
cheers

[Jorge Lescale]

Kwamey: Haha yeah pose thing is weird , i made the covering part exercise and it its funny how it looks, lol, thanx mate. i think i will test an other pose, i want to show my modeling and texturing so i dont want to make the pose an issue for my artwork, i think i will be learning and studying in order to achieve better results, thanx for the help, can you please give your opinion on this new test?

robbiestyle: Hey man, thanx a lot , some very useful tips mate, but i think i will try something more standard..hehe maybe next time ill be trying a difficult one again.

deep: Hi man, im happy u liked it man, i dont have a high res on that pose only t-pose since im posing the Low poly version of it , and well im learning how to paint hair..hehe im painting Hair on 2d for this one...only the flying ones.


New Pose test ..what do you think? (sorry about textures mess, different channels on uvs).

[Jorge Lescale]

Here is a little fast rendeing test...

[Disco Stu]

very nice

[gordon-v]

nice work! thats a way better pose. the face still seams a little bit flat to me.
very nice work on her clothing. man i know how hard it its to model a female! keep it up, gordon!

[Jorge Lescale]

Hey Guys, well here is the new pose rendered.. hope u like it , all comments and feedback are welcome.

[fattkid]

Nice work. Good job on the outfit modeling and texturing. I'd say the hand still needs some work, and she looks a bit cross eyed. Overall, pretty good. Keep it up!

[Jorge Lescale]

fattkid:Hello dude, yeah i see what you mean about eyes, i did a couple of tweaks to them and did overwrite the upper image, hope now looks better, thanx

[DigitalDreamer]

I like the new pose, though I agree about the hand needing some more work, I think with a big ole axe like that, her thumb should be wrapped tight around the handle. The way it is now I think it makes the axe look light. But good work.

[Jorge Lescale]

DigitalDreamer: hello , thank you a lot for the feedback, u have a good eye! , and thax for the words

[Jorge Lescale]

Hello everyone, well this is what im working these days, i created a thread at cg society to invite everyone who wants to practice portraits, ill be creating one each week, the idea is that many artist make a portrait of the same person to compare and give feedback each other...hope u find some time to participate...all is about learning

here is the link : LINKhttp://forums.cgsociety.org/showthre...46#post6055946


and well my progress on the first one :

[Jorge Lescale]

and a little test using mental ray , used decimation master to get it out of zb safely..

[manzarek123]

hahah Mr.Bean! awesome portrait! really looks like him!

EDIT: hey! pero para que escribo en ingles, me acabo de dar cuenta que eres de mexico hermano! que genial encontrar paisanos por aqui!, ya que casi no hay!, no pero enserio, la imagen de Bean es lo mejor!!