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    Hey guys,

    Heres my dominance war's entry, any C&C is appreciated and it was a real pleasure to participate in this war with so much talent.



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    I like the clean lines in your character. Overall, he could use some more grime and dirt in my opinion. Great job finishing, and amazing character design sheets.

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    This is awesome, I like wacky cool clothing designs.
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    Hey man, really nice work. I'd say everything is quite well done, but the arm anatomy is off, particularly the forearm/bicep insertion area. The groin/pelvis/waist proportion/structure seems kinda funky too. A bit elongated. I'm being kinda picky cuz this is quality work. Nice presentation and props for the nice 2D work as well.

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    Nice sculpt Wizo!

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    Really nice work!!


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    nice work, kinda reminds me a bit of mirrors edge in style.
    i prefer the bright orange colours
    in your concept, gives it some contrast.

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    Joecyriac - I also think adding dirt is one aspect I need to improve on, I will keep this in mind for my futurs projects.Thx!

    Kravit - Thanks!! I want to be character concept artist later on , Im super glad you liked the design.

    fattkid - Very good eye, to be honest these are the areas I always mess up, even with 2D drawing hehe. I will start sculpting with more references and try to make something more correct in anatomy. Thanks for the advice!

    Mind Symbion - Thanks!

    wolfsoull - Cheers!

    euge - Thanks euge! I removed the orange swirl in case it looked to much like the cgland logo . I think I have been influenced by Mirrors Edge quite a lot, something about clean and vivid colors is really appealing to me.

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