Action Hero - Deaf Destiny (Villain )

[jp_smith]

Yep I'm a dork Love the heels though, great stuff!

[Moni-Poroni]

maxinkuk
Thank you for the kind compliment


Gohanf22
Thank you for the kind compliment too


jp_smith

LOL no problem... thank you for the kind compliment
BTW-I didn´t read the wrong post

[jp_smith]

Moni, have you done any more work to her head? Are you going to model individual eyelashes, or just a shaped mass? Just curious how your were going to approach that.

[Moni-Poroni]

I´m working on her head right now...
But I´m still unhappy with that....
I´ve added the clef to her fore head...
But I´ve still much work with the ears..the lips...and her whole mimic..
she looks like a dead doll no life in there and too artifical...



Oh..and yepp I´ll add individual eyelashes made from zspheres...
I think that´ll look much better...

c+c are more than welcome...especially concerning the head

[jp_smith]

Moni - I think you have some slight proportion and shape issues. Her brow ridge seems a little bit sharp and abrupt for a female. The lips seem overly pursed as opposed to pouty (which is what I think you were going for). The head itself seems a little too round from the front, I'd push it in on the sides a bit. Obviously you need to get the ear pulled off her head a little. You could probably pull up her head a tad from the mid nose up, this would help add some volume to the top of her head and make the nose not look quite so short. Her eye shape could also use a bit of tweaking as well but that's hard to describe, if you would like you could give me a shot of the front and side of her head and I could do a paint-over, to illustrate the points I'm talking about?

Jason

[Moni-Poroni]

Thank you.. that would be great....and much easier to understand
I totally agree with the things you´ve told me..
Ok..here are the pics...
LOL...my Zbrush crashed..and I didn´ safe
now the clef is missing..and the work on the eyelids is destroyed ^^
Still sooo much work with her head..so that doesn´t matter






Thanks again for the kind help ...
I really appreciate it

Edit:Lol I´ve just seen that the ears are on different places

[jp_smith]

Cool, I'll get on this when I get a chance.

[Moni-Poroni]

Don´t stress... I really don´t want to bring trouble up on you I have a lot of other things to do for now (for example the violin )
but NOW I´ll go to bed ( 3:00 AM )
Thanks again

[SolidSnakexxx]

Moni-Poroni, big update there. And looking sharp with the note on the forehead. And I feel the pain for losing your work... But cheer up think of it as a practice like I try to do.....

The head's coming right along I think the area that you want to check (which you already know) would be the ears that need to be pulled out of the head some more. I kind of like the eyes on the previous post better...as I think the latest post, the lower part of the eye's just too curved.. (But again that's my view) However, the overall progress is excellent

[jp_smith]

Moni - this is a pretty quick and sloppy paintover but I think you'll get what my comments meant by looking at it. I'll get to the side view soon.

[Moni-Poroni]

SolidSnakexxx
Thank you .. hm... yepp...it doesn´t really matter that I`ve lost a little bit of my work... it´s always a good practice
Thanks again for the kind compliment


THANK YOU JASON!!!
I just woke up...and now I´ll begin with the modifications
I´ve a lot of time today - it´s Z-unday
(LOL maybe you´re getting tired of my wordplay...Z-orry ^^ but I have to joke around with this... )

Thanks again for the advice and the paintover
BTW-you call this sloppy...??? I really don´t want to know what you´re calling good

[jp_smith]

Ok here's a quick side view, hope this is helpful...and keep in mind this is just my opinion, she's your character, take it with a grain of salt.

[Moni-Poroni]

Update

Jason-thank you so much
Ok..here´s what I´ve done so far...
I´m still not finished with the ears... and the lips...and the nose..
but please let me know what you think...








and I´ve made the lashes with Zspheres but I´m not satisfied with them...
it´s been just an exercise....







C+C are more than welcome..

[Gohanf22]

oh i love the AJ look so much on her hun. SMASHING! as AJ would say in Tomb Raider to this question "Do I Love the look?" "ABSOLUTELY!"

Edit: PS. - KEEP THE LIPS!

[jp_smith]

Much improved Moni, I'd go fuller on the lips though I think. The head is looking much much better.