Action Hero - Deaf Destiny (Villain )

[Moni-Poroni]

Crotalis
Thank you for the kind comment
Yes I agree - the forearm has been to short
but I´ve been working on it..
If you like please tell me if it´s better now...




Hamilcar
Thank you for your compliment
and thanks a lot for the link




SolidSnakexxx
Hey thank you..
You look forward for more Zsculpt ^^
Okay..here it is
I´m thankfull for every advice




threetails
Thank you
Yes...sculpting women is sooooo hard !!!!!!!!!!
But I don´t give up...
That´s my personal challenge



leandroloaiza
I started laughing because of the
Thank you for your kind compliments





wethand
Thank you for your kind compliments
I´m happy to hear that you´ve enjoyed it




ISK-86
Hehe
But if we wouldn´t be that hard to underdstand it would make no fun






Finally my new upate....



I hope the proportions of the arm are better now ??
I think I´ll add the details after I´ve posed her....






And now her head....






I´m not finished ...still much work to do...
Today I´ve added the eyes...

<<I´ve found here @ ZBC really great tutorials for making them >>

But I´m not finished with the eyelids and I´m going to sculp the eyelashes with Zshperes...later

[Gohanf22]

oh man. those look like angelina jolie lips. not that I'm complaining cause Angelina Jolie is GORGEOUS! I'm a fan as you can see, lol. anyway, your doing one heck of job, mate. keep up the good work.

[Gohanf22]

actually, now that i look at the face, lol. IT DOES LOOK LIKE AJ! lol. nice job mate.

[gregoconn]

Hey Moni I really like your concept and hope you get through to the end.

A few comments which might be able to help you on your venture.

Your head seems to be suffering from what I like to call the 'square' syndrome. I know the look of it because I used to and still do sometimes in the early stages make this mistake.

The problem is that the face (I don't me the whole head just the face) is too big. If you look at a normal persons face you will find that it reaches it's widest point just behind the ears. You can probably also notice that to top of her head is very flat and not rounded like most peoples heads.

If I can make a suggestion which may help you solve this problem, it woul be too select her face, the whole face mouth to eyes and try scaling it down a bit.

There are a few more things I could mention but thought I'd start there. I really like your start and would love to see you reach the end of the project!

I hope this is helps and is constructive,

G

[DAnconia]

I would bring the ears down a bit as the ear lobe connects with the jaw. The top of the ear should go no higher than the top of the eye. Also bring them out a bit too horizantally. they look tapped down to the head. the neck muscle is a bit too pronounced. makes her look like she has an Adam's apple. Rounding off the cranium is definitely going to help.

Female rendering has very few lines and creases. You can look at any young female superhero to male superhero and see the difference in detail. It is drastic.
Also you could continue to elongate the hips a bit more top side. As that seperates the female hips from a mans hip. That and the slight tilt forward. Look forward to seeing more.

[Moni-Poroni]

Gohanf22
Thank you for your kind compliment
And...Angelina Jolie ^^ I really loooove her but it wasn´t my intention to sculpt her


gregoconn + DAnconia
Thank you so much for your advice guys...
I totally agree with you
It´s 00:30 Am and I´ve to sleep now
But now I know what I´ll do tomorrow...
That´ll be a lot of work...^^

Good Night@all

[ISK-86]

Konnichiwa!!!

Lots of good progress...

A little correction in the arm.... just pull some pixols and it will get solved

[Moni-Poroni]

Hey @ll

Today I´ve been working on the arm... and corrected the position of the ellbow ... (I hope so ^^)
Thank you so much ISK-86 for the reference pic

I brought the ears a little bit down and made them smaller...but I´ve still much work with them...they still look tapped down on her head too much ^^

I decreased her face a little bit and worked on the shape of her head...
I hope it looks a little bit better now...
She really had a square head gregoconn
but now it looks like an egg to me ?????
Maybe the top of the skull is too high now ???
I´m looking forward to see her with hair





Hmm...I also started to reduce her neck muscles...
I hope she hasn´t any longer something that´s looking like an Adam´s apple...

And I also started to give her more hips (I gave her a lot of chocolate last night ^^ well and to be honest with you...I gave myself a lot of too ^^ haha)
And finally I´ve started to sculpt the slight tild forward..





C+C are more than welcome...
Your critic is very helpfull for me
I want to become better

[SolidSnakexxx]

The updated images look good I like the pouting lips. I think the overall face/head is good now...except may be the ears that would be nice to pull out some more.

[DAnconia]

The face looks much better. Much more feminine. The added mass to the hips really came out well. Chocolate is very good.

[VitorFerreira]

Nice stuff dude. The new face is really better, but still a bit like a sphere.

Push the ears a tad in, go down on the levels and play more with the basic shape before getting in the details. The same happens in the body, it has some awesome shapes going there, but the silhuette is very simple, like an inflated ballon. But I'm liking this so far, I play violin my self :d well at least I used too.

[gregoconn]

That's a great improvement Moni! I'm glad that my comments helped.

I don't think the top of your head is too high! In face you could probably take it a little higher. Another quick note as I notice you mentioned her neck muscles. the sterno - mastoid runs from the clavical behind the jaw I put in a little reference picture for you which might help you see what I mean.




Keep going this is starting to look really nice. I particularly like the shape of her eyes.

[Moni-Poroni]

SolidSnakexxx
Thank you for the compliment
Yes..the ears ^^ they really drive me crazy


DAnconia
Thank you for the compliment
Yep...Chocolate is very goooood


VitorFerreira
Thank you for the compliment
I´m working on the ears
Lol...inflated ballon ??
Hope you won´t say that to any women
But I know what you´re meaning..
I hope that I´ll have time tomorrow to fix that.
Oh and you´re playing violin...??
really cool...


gregoconn
Thank you for your compliment
and thanks a lot for the reference pic...
I´m sure it´ll help...

[Hamilcar]

Nice work, just keep working it

[Seavannah]

Moni-Poroni your doing great! Yeah I also had the problem with either making the head too round, too square, and too eggheaded...lol. This site helped me it has some really good close up reference shots of females and males. I eneded up paying for this site awhile back, worth the money if you can, but for now check out the free samples link at the top. There is also a link on the topmost of the page for Comic references...huh I am going to have to check that out myself it wasn't there before. These pics are also very good for reference textures and the like.
http://www.3d.sk/
Each of the topmost links on the page have free samples. There is nudity but is not bad, it is for artists. Hope it helps it did me.