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    Default Action Hero - Deaf Destiny (Villain )

    Entry by Monja Petri



    Villain : Deaf Destiny
    Real Name : Nathalie Cocodrillo
    Age : 26


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    Backstory:
    As a child Nathalie learned to play the violine and soon it was clear
    that she was highly skilled.
    She gave concerts in the whole world.
    She was a star....

    But one fateful day she fell ill...
    She got a severe flu and inflammation of the middle ear...
    And thatīs where her life began to change...

    The physicians made a mistake while treating her an she became deaf
    - in both ears
    Her worst nightmare became reality...

    Even if she could still play the violine...she could no longer hear
    her own music.
    She became reclusive...became depressive.
    She gave up on life...because music was the center of her life
    and so she drove to the nearby mountains and jumped off a cliff...

    But it was not the end...

    She woke up..
    Had it been weeks or even months??
    She didnīt know..
    She was laying on some bed in some room...
    Her eyes fell onto her right arm and then onto both of her legs
    - they were mechanical...
    She also wondered about the suit she was wearing...
    Nothing was like it had been before and in the flickering light she saw a table in the otherwise empty room...
    On top of the table was a cd-player with a note next to it, an odd looking violine and a compatible violine-bow.
    She got up and began to read the note...

    "Do not ask any questions..play your favourite song while listening to the cd...this is your destiny"

    She pressed play and heard people crying.
    She heard screams.... shouts of pain... howls of desperation
    but she beamed with joy, coud hardly believe it
    - she was able to hear again!!!!!!!!!!!
    and she took the violine and played her favourite song...
    But after a few minutes the screams fell silent.
    She still played the violine but she could no longer hear her song...

    She began to scream - nothing...
    ...silence

    With rage and despair she hit the cd-player...and accidentially
    pressed once again the play-button..
    Immediately she heard the same horrible screams...and began to realize
    that she could only hear when others are suffering...

    She became angry about her destiny and she wanted to spread pain and sorrow...
    And so she began to seek revenge from everybody who could hear
    music to escape her silent world just a few minutes..

    She wanted to make the whole world become deaf.

    She became Deaf Desiny...






    Abilities


    1. The shock wave violine
    As soon as she starts to play
    everyone who hears her melody is paralyzed and when
    the song comes to an end they are deaf
    - forever



    2. The razor-blade-notes
    She can throw them like a boomerang - they always return to her.
    They donīt kill....they enter the troath and only cut trough the
    vocal chords so the victims can neither sing nor talk anymore..




    3. Laser bow
    In place of the traditional horsehair that normal bows
    are strung with is a laser-string with wich she can play
    on the violine or with which she can torture people
    to her heartīs content to make them scream...
    It cuts flesh and bones as if they were butter.
    She especially loves to chop off musicians hands
    - so they will never be able to play an instrument again





    Debility
    She is wearing a metronome which is integrated in her suit.
    Itīs dictating her heartbeat and the only way to kill her
    is to disrupt the metronomeīs beat.

    But up to now no one was able to find the right frequency...
    Last edited by Moni-Poroni; 01-05-09 at 01:40 PM. Reason: I wrote some words wrong :)

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    Default So scary....

    Among all villians I think this is the worst of all.... say.. I'm a musician and i know about the desperation of getting deaf (My music teacher became deaf)
    her story is sooo o sweet....

    Fell in love with DD : )

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    Default 5* just for the great story let alone your art I would give more if I could

    wow what a great morbid story....don't get me wrong I love morbid . Your story is so unique and awesomely detailed and rich. I really relate to your character... I ended up on the receiving end of a genetic hearing loss that is slowly robbing me of my hearing. It can be so frustrating sometimes ... but to have some doctor actually mess up and if I lost my hearing due to that I would be really pissed too I bet you all are glad to hear me say I can't play the violin lol . I am now pretty fine with it since I can work a computer and am quite happy in my own little zbrush world lol . I soooo love your concept art, I am soo envious. Love the note on her forehead. I can't wait to see her finished.

    I would give you 5* just for the great story let alone your art, I would give more if I could, just noticed we can't rate these threads like other threads.. well here
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    Last edited by Seavannah; 12-29-08 at 06:08 PM.

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    Ohh...the concept sketch is real cool. Love her power as well

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    Original concept! Nice work!

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    Thanks a a lot

    I hope you understand what Iīm writing
    It alway takes a little time to translate whatīs on my mind
    But Iīm sure about one thing - after this contest my english skills will be much better

    dustbin1_uk
    Iīm happy you like my concept..thanks for the nice comment


    ISK-86
    Thank you for your compliments
    You fell in love with DD ????
    According to what I have heared she is still single...
    Maybe I can pull a few strings for you haha
    But I hope for you that she wont use her laser string


    Seavannah
    Thank you so much for your compliments
    and for the 5*
    I feel very sorry about what you wrote...but Iīm glad to hear that you are fine and that you enjoy the ZBrush Community
    Sounds like you are addicted to Zbrush..like me
    more precisely- like everybody here
    Sometimes Zbrush is hard and it takes up a lot of time but itīs soo much fun and there is so much to discover
    Happy Zbrushing..
    and really nice to meet a female fellow


    SolidSnakexxx
    Thank you
    But Iīm a little bit terrified that you LOVE her powers ???
    Shall I arrange a meeting for you too ^^ ??
    I promise she wont bite ( without engagement of course ^^ )






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    Original concept! There's a lot of potential for some cool sub-tools here. Good luck!

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    Crotalis
    Thank you But Iīm a little bit scared of the subtools ^^
    But Iīll worry about that later
    Happy new year

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    Yes, Moni-Poroni, I'd love to meet her......(^_^) Or at least see her get sculpted as a viciously sexy villain.

    BTW, don't worry about the subtools, the concept is quite easy to grasp.

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    Love the story of your character, looking forward to seeing what you make of her!

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    Fess
    Thanks for the kind Comment
    Last edited by Moni-Poroni; 01-05-09 at 03:17 AM.

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    Finally my first Update - only small steps


    Donīt be surprised about the missing arm
    and the incomplete legs...
    they will be added later as subtools because theyīll be mechanical..
    And donīt be surprised about another important missing female part
    I will sculpt that later...


    DD-1.jpg
    Last edited by Moni-Poroni; 01-02-09 at 08:08 AM.

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    I didnīt like the topology in the hips area at all...
    might cause problems during the sculpting progress later
    so I edited the existing topology a bit...

    c+c are more than welcome

    DD-2.jpg



    DD-3.jpg
    Last edited by Moni-Poroni; 01-08-09 at 10:16 AM. Reason: haha ^^ lol... "bad topo" ..."new topo " ^^

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    Looks like a good start from ZSphere... I'm sure you won't forget that certain important female part

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    Hey Moni! I really like the smoothness you managed to get around the groin region in the base mesh. I often tend to some pinching and/or mesh overlap around the inner thigh/groin section. Any advice?

    Edit:

    Also glad to see you've decided to delve into the subtools!

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