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    Default Action Hero - Deaf Destiny (Villain )

    Entry by Monja Petri



    Villain : Deaf Destiny
    Real Name : Nathalie Cocodrillo
    Age : 26


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    Backstory:
    As a child Nathalie learned to play the violine and soon it was clear
    that she was highly skilled.
    She gave concerts in the whole world.
    She was a star....

    But one fateful day she fell ill...
    She got a severe flu and inflammation of the middle ear...
    And thatīs where her life began to change...

    The physicians made a mistake while treating her an she became deaf
    - in both ears
    Her worst nightmare became reality...

    Even if she could still play the violine...she could no longer hear
    her own music.
    She became reclusive...became depressive.
    She gave up on life...because music was the center of her life
    and so she drove to the nearby mountains and jumped off a cliff...

    But it was not the end...

    She woke up..
    Had it been weeks or even months??
    She didnīt know..
    She was laying on some bed in some room...
    Her eyes fell onto her right arm and then onto both of her legs
    - they were mechanical...
    She also wondered about the suit she was wearing...
    Nothing was like it had been before and in the flickering light she saw a table in the otherwise empty room...
    On top of the table was a cd-player with a note next to it, an odd looking violine and a compatible violine-bow.
    She got up and began to read the note...

    "Do not ask any questions..play your favourite song while listening to the cd...this is your destiny"

    She pressed play and heard people crying.
    She heard screams.... shouts of pain... howls of desperation
    but she beamed with joy, coud hardly believe it
    - she was able to hear again!!!!!!!!!!!
    and she took the violine and played her favourite song...
    But after a few minutes the screams fell silent.
    She still played the violine but she could no longer hear her song...

    She began to scream - nothing...
    ...silence

    With rage and despair she hit the cd-player...and accidentially
    pressed once again the play-button..
    Immediately she heard the same horrible screams...and began to realize
    that she could only hear when others are suffering...

    She became angry about her destiny and she wanted to spread pain and sorrow...
    And so she began to seek revenge from everybody who could hear
    music to escape her silent world just a few minutes..

    She wanted to make the whole world become deaf.

    She became Deaf Desiny...






    Abilities


    1. The shock wave violine
    As soon as she starts to play
    everyone who hears her melody is paralyzed and when
    the song comes to an end they are deaf
    - forever



    2. The razor-blade-notes
    She can throw them like a boomerang - they always return to her.
    They donīt kill....they enter the troath and only cut trough the
    vocal chords so the victims can neither sing nor talk anymore..




    3. Laser bow
    In place of the traditional horsehair that normal bows
    are strung with is a laser-string with wich she can play
    on the violine or with which she can torture people
    to her heartīs content to make them scream...
    It cuts flesh and bones as if they were butter.
    She especially loves to chop off musicians hands
    - so they will never be able to play an instrument again





    Debility
    She is wearing a metronome which is integrated in her suit.
    Itīs dictating her heartbeat and the only way to kill her
    is to disrupt the metronomeīs beat.

    But up to now no one was able to find the right frequency...
    Last edited by Moni-Poroni; 01-05-09 at 01:40 PM. Reason: I wrote some words wrong :)

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    Default So scary....

    Among all villians I think this is the worst of all.... say.. I'm a musician and i know about the desperation of getting deaf (My music teacher became deaf)
    her story is sooo o sweet....

    Fell in love with DD : )

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    Default 5* just for the great story let alone your art I would give more if I could

    wow what a great morbid story....don't get me wrong I love morbid . Your story is so unique and awesomely detailed and rich. I really relate to your character... I ended up on the receiving end of a genetic hearing loss that is slowly robbing me of my hearing. It can be so frustrating sometimes ... but to have some doctor actually mess up and if I lost my hearing due to that I would be really pissed too I bet you all are glad to hear me say I can't play the violin lol . I am now pretty fine with it since I can work a computer and am quite happy in my own little zbrush world lol . I soooo love your concept art, I am soo envious. Love the note on her forehead. I can't wait to see her finished.

    I would give you 5* just for the great story let alone your art, I would give more if I could, just noticed we can't rate these threads like other threads.. well here
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    Ohh...the concept sketch is real cool. Love her power as well

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    Original concept! Nice work!

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    moni the look of her is coming along nicely. the only thing that i would say that would need fixed is define the abdomen just a little bit. i'm having that problem atm and i need to fix that but I dont think I'm going to be able to seeing as how i have a damn mouse and not a tablet. cheers. your doing one heck of a job and she is getting bangin.
    "To see a world in a grain of sand..." -William Blake

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    Looking really good. I would give her a bit more width in her hips up top. Dont forget about those hands. Believe it or not,

    "If you can get the head and the hands right, the viewer will forgive you for everything else."
    - Norman Rockwell

    Keep going!
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    Hello Moni,
    sheīs on a good way to be a erotic female character. I think the mouth is a little bit to much in a kiss pose at the moment.
    Good luck
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    Gohanf22
    Thank you for the compliment and thank you for the advice regarding her abdomen... Iīll work on that after Iīve posed her

    DAnconia
    Thank you for your kind comment
    and thanx for your advice..
    Iīll work on the hips again after I posed her..



    JR_Rossi
    Thank you too for your compliment
    I think this isnīt the final mimic..





    New Update

    Maybe youīve seen her eyes already...
    hereīs a bigger pic of one of them..
    -I found really great tutorials here at ZBC THANX
    They were really really helpfull...

    Before I found them, her eyes looked sooo awful ^^ Itīs much better now...
    Iīll add more details later when Iīm finished with the rest...
    Iīm a little bit scarred ..time is ticking away^^

    Still have no clue how I can export the Movie from Zbrush...and how to paint my model later and so on
    Iīll think about that later... it makes me nervous right now
    -But Iīve already discovered Tutorials here @ ZBC which might help me when time has come...


    DD-eye.jpg








    And finally I finished her human hand... -for now
    After the posing process Iīll add more Details..and sheīll get longer fingernails...





    DD-hand.jpg




    C+C are welcome as always...
    Last edited by Moni-Poroni; 01-11-09 at 04:20 PM.

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