Last edited by dustinbrown; 04-16-10 at 11:42 AM.
This one is looking sweet so far, great details, and I really like the robot design. If I may just crit one thing though, I think it would be really cool to have pipes wires and whatever, at the link between upper and lower arm.
Keep it up man, it looks really good
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holy crap he's got alot of parts
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@-Storm-: I'm trying to stick as close to Little Druid's drawing as I can to show that I can model from a concept. I've barely touched the area you mentioned, it's just blocked in for the time being. The mech hands are still in sad shape as well. Loads to do.
@JohnYip: Yeah...the feedback I got on my last demo reel was that I had too many simple busts and people wanted to see more full body characters with clothing and accessories. This is my first attempt at trying to follow through on that feedback. He's definitely got clothing and accessories
and two sets of arms, work hard buddy
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Yeah the folds in your jacket are working a lot better now.
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+1 to Sadam's comment, the folds looks really good now.
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very nice man! very nice! keep it up man fabric is hart, but it looks awsome allready!
very nice.
I don't want to make a mess while the project is very advanced already, but I think that the head is way too small. I understand that this is not real human etc but people here often make heads smaller than heads should be and then make them smaller even more
With this proportion that character looks gigantic - if that was your intention then ignore me :]
Very good work!
Wait whaat when did you get thiiis good?
Ace sculpting dustin! Really nice cloth.
The cloth is much better in this last revision. You might want to (on a new layer) smooth out the wrinkles a bit, and then play with the layer intensity to blend it the right ammount.
Really nice work so far Dustin. I look forward to seeing the finished piece.
Last edited by Aberrant; 04-30-10 at 10:05 AM.
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keep going good progress!
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What a great concept and sculpt!!! looking forward to see it finished!
That is looking bad ass dustin. Easily my favorite piece so far. Your cloth/wrinkles has vastly improved from your previous pieces. Thanks for the motivation!