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    Default Ganesh Poojari ------Sketchbook

    Hi guys this is my first post here.


    Made this Military Officer model in about 3 days in my freetime in office.
    The model is done zbrush.
    Need ur Critics & Comments on
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    Hey there good job I like it!
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    thanks Darukin

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    nice sculpt. "Cornel" is spelled Colonel....
    Once more unto the breach, dear friends....

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    Thanks kansuke

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    Hi guys
    Im stuck in retopolgy of this face can any one help me out in this.
    The near the beard is not getting retopolized properly .
    Solution needed plz

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    Lightbulb Gorilla The Warrior

    Made this gorila model in about 3 days in my freetime in office. Inspired by a sculpture made by the artist Mark Newman.
    http://www.thesculptorscorner.com/ga...g2_itemId=3429
    The model is done zbrush
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    No real critiques from me. This stuff is pretty good. Look forward to seeing more.

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    kind of final image .
    plzz comment
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    critics on this plz

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    The gorilla's teeth seem a little large, flat, and underworked.

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    Yajad,

    Very nice models I like the stylized nature of the Miltary man's face. My biggest critique would be in regards to the lighting of the "finalish" image. The background is suggestive of a sunrise/sunset to me and it seems that the light source is behind your figure. With that in mind I don't think that his glasses would have such overwhelming reflectivity or colour. Also the burning embers of his cigar would cast their own light, however small, in such a dark setting. In fact I think that there's a lot of potential to add some serious mood to the overall piece with a few lighting corrections. The other bit that bothers me personally is the blur on the fence in the background. It's ruins the continuity of the piece imo, a bit of blur on the trailing end of the fence would work but I think the portion closest to your character should be crisp and clean.

    On the Gorrilla warrior I have to agree with Dustinbrown. The teeth could use a little more love. The canines would do well with some thickening out and the incisors could use a bit more definition. I also think his eyes could use some work too. They don't carry the feel of the gorrilla's expression at all. He's screaming, a war cry or challenge perhaps, and the muscles in his face are tense yet his eyes a flacid and have an almost sad quality to me. Just my two cents.

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    Thanks Dustinbrown
    i will be sure working on the teeth


    Thanks Reverendwyrm
    Thankls for ur critics

    About the Military Officer i will really work on the lighting part soon . I Wanted to put some transparent glasses but there was no option such that in zbrush .So i was not able to do that. I will sure correct the lighting

    About Gorilla
    Ya i will be working on teeth part sure. About the eye part can u help me out. C u an just give some more idea exactly how should it look . U can edit the photo and show me

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