Whoops, I didn't know a bunch of people commented on this thread. Sorry to anyone I didn't respond to and thanks for the compliments.
skullbeast - yes you are totally right on the money with your observations. The colors were way too saturated and the renders were awful. There is way too much detail in the face so it's hard to tell what's going on. I rushed through at the end but then went back later and spent a lot more time getting a better render together for print. This one is a little better but still not exactly what I wanted. Thanks for kudos!