Brett's Sketchbook

[bcarrancho]

hi Brett

Do you live in South Africa. if so please could you send your CV to me at benjamin@dbcc.co.za

Thanks

[brettSinclair]

Update on the pose. Re did the top.. May change his expression too. Eventually Work has kept me away from the fun stuff. Haha.

Crits welcomed.



tez: Thanks for the comment. Its my 5th year doing 3d and my 2nd year using zbrush . I haven't looked back since I bought my copy.

bcarrancho: Yup. live in south africa.

[piz]

Very nice job Brett!
Only one thing: I'm not sure for the deformation of his left foot...
Expecially in the left render...

Anyway really cool model!

Ciao!

P.S.
Excuse me for the ugly English....

[brettSinclair]

Hey piz thanks for always replying .

cheers for the crit. yup. feet are also wip. workin on this stuff in free time never allows me to cover everything.

Your english is waaaay better than my italian, anyday

Ciao

[DAnconia]

Looking good so far, but the pose bothers me a bit. I would dip his shoulders further and bring his left elbow up even higher. just have him crouching a little bit and not turn his torso too much. Keep the twist, but it just seems a little too exaggerated. if my memory serves me correctly i believe he shoots that energy ball closer from the hip and not from the shoulder. Which would make more sense cause in martial arts class they teach you the basic punch from the hip.

also, for the correct fighting stance, the right leg should be bent and not fully extended with the knee facing the viewer. You could even lower his hips a bit cause right now it looks his center of gravity is way off.

The head seems a little small on him as well.

I know your model will come out looking great. Keep it up!!!

[patchoo04]

hi i really envy all the subscribers here ,,, they including you made a very amazing sketch ,,, i would like to make one my own how do you do that??? im new here i dont know whats what,,,, could you please teach me a thing or two if its ok with you... i would appreciate it,, but if your busy its ok,,,

[biserk]

Kicking ass! Inspiring stuff.

[brettSinclair]

woops double post

[brettSinclair]

Hello. Been awhile since I touched cammy. I decided to start over with a more fighting pose. Cause thats what she does so it makes sense I guess. Haha. I hope you like this pose. I'm enjoying it more. Thanks for looking.



DAnconia: Wow! Thanks for the great crit dude. It makes total sense. I guess I'm always trying to exagerate my pose to get that "cartoon" look. Its not appropriate here is it? Haha. I'll Check out the head. Could be that his gee is high up.

patchoo04: Hey man. Welcome to zbrushcentral . The best advice I can give you is to go to gnomonology or digital tutors. They have tons of stuff. Post work so that people can crit you. The internet is an ocean of knowledge. I don't have time to teach I'm afraid. All work and no play makes me dull .

biserk: Thank you!

[piz]

Wow! Great Brett!!!

[LIQUIDSNEEK]

Nice work brett ,i like the new definition in the legs

[ministerart@hotmail.co.uk]

your Cammy has the best digital butt ive ever seen....wonderful

[Leshiy3d]

wow
very nice, love that back view a lot

[rodion vlasov]

wow! very like the last one,great update.

[Gumpshmee]

I believe her bottom is my favorite bit. Good Job.