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    Default Random tough guy wip. Your thoughts?

    I'd like a few critiques on the proportions and anatomy so far. I know it's not much yet but it would be a big help. Thanks


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    I'm not an expert like most of the guys here but I'd recommend breaking up the symmetry a little bit.

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    great head so far man,

    as to the props of the character they seem off, but you could be going for that effect. anyway, this image shows the problem areas that I see on the sculpt. keep in mind that these are just the "typical" male person proportions and yours could be different. but here ya go.

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    SixxPixels- Thanks man. I meant to do that but I got too into sculpting haha


    goast666- Wow that's a great help! I do want him to have a larger than normal nose ridge area but maybe it is a little too much. Now that I look at it, his ears might be too far back as well.


    Thanks guys!

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    How's this? I started painting it too but I'm not sure if I'll keep it. Do you think the proportions are any better?
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    Hi buddy, i like this painting, but i think brow is too far out yet...

    keep going!
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    You have a really great start here. I think that he looks like he is made out of putty though. Try sharpening him up some with the move tool in lower subdivision levels and maybe the pinch tool in higher sd levels. Good luck and keep up the great work!

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