my first dwarf

[ello]

hi there

actually its my first more or less complex model i did in zBrush. it was more kind of practice (guess it still looks like it) but i am happy how it went, so i thought i'd show it here, to get some more constructive critics and hints..



i hope it fits to this forum.
attached is an earlier screenshot from the zSphere if anyone cares...
btw, i painted the texture in zBrush, too and exported it as obj to get it into cinema4d. works quite good

cheers,
ello

[Jason Belec]

It's a great and everything fits the forum!

Some edge definition in areas will help, like where the hair starts, where the mits and feet start, etc.

The material isn't helping, but the character has style and potential.

[ello]

thanks jason.. i show another shot, since my post above has been edited (i guess because it was a render in cinema and not from zBrush?)

so here is the actual version , where i added more detail, created somekind of clothes and hair..

[Jason Belec]

Getting pretty good!