Sweet! Well done.
The only thing I'd mention is that every illo is supposed to look like it's a photograph (as in "make it look like a Poloroid shot with that 'white box' around it" as though all these had been pasted into a child's photo album... you know the look I mean). I only mention this to save you time in the future if you plan on doing more. In other words, you don't have to do these wide, letterbox landscape shots and all, being they're all going to be "boxed" in the photo 'frame'. Perhaps you already realized this and were just putting up an image you had finished without the bother of post production. Either way, nice illo.
I'll point Dave at this tonight and let him check it out himself. I think he'll like it.
I'll let you know what Dave says (or, if you want, send me a PM with your EMail and I'll just forward that over to him so the two of you can get on the same page).