anatomy test (Nudity)

[MSMBrush]

i am learning anatomy

modeling creating details
using zsphaere and rendring in zbrush
critics are welcome

[patsiu]

Looking good there, The top part of the bone looks a little heavy, dont know what thats calls :P cant wait to see the finished model

[Ron Harris]

with the exception of her collar bone,it is a bit off, I really dig your model so far.

Ron
catfishmn@aol.com

[MSMBrush]

thnx Ron Harris in my next post i will correct my fault

[MSMBrush]

patsiu thnx i will coplete it soon!

[MSMBrush]

here a short update of my model today i made her face but this model is in progress i really need ur comments plz help me to complete this i really need ur comments

[Moochie]

Nice work. If you do your test renders in AAHalf mode, it'll make your pics smaller and will get rid of the jagged edges.

The head shape needs a bit of work. You've got the mouth, nose and eyes in the right places, and the ear is close. But the dome of the skull is too big. I'll attach a copy of the head shot with an actual female skull overlayed so you can see. But you're definitely going in the right direction.

[brettSinclair]

Hey looking really cool. Your nose has a strange crease under it. By the nostrils. Sort of a bump? Also the ears lack shape. Its a bit of a blocky ear. I also think your shoulders can come in. The distance between your scapular and shoulder just seem to far apart? Or maybe its cause your scapular and lats are one? Sorry no over lay here i'm just judging by eye so i could be wrong. Good luck. Its coming along nicely!

[calum5ZB]

Beautifull,Can I add the nostrils seem too lengthy.Just noticed it as something I would look to make smaller if the work was mine,superb contors throughout and wonderfull potential here;-),cal



watching..

[MSMBrush]

calum5ZB,brettSinclair and Moochie thsnk u very much for ur helpful comments i realy nee d this in my next thread i will change this as soon as posible
thnk u very much
thnk again

[cc909]

Hey MSMBrush,



Your model is looking good! There are just two things that look a bit off to me. Like several have already commented about is the head. To me the head has a masculine appearance to it. I think that if you were to shrink the size of the cranium and thin out the face a bit it will help a lot. The clavicles are a bit too long. Also, I think that you should increase the volume of the ribcage. I feel that you are loosing some volume near the serratus anterior. This will give her torso a more v look, to help support the large size of here breasts.



Keep up the great work. Other than these areas you model is looking great.



Brian Bouffard

[MSMBrush]

cc909 thnx for ur nice comments ur comments are great for me

[MSMBrush]

i change my model again with ur all help i made her leg and foot plz cirtic on it i feel happy when crtic on it

[LiftNw8]

Looks good so far, I would have to say though the toes are a bit thin and appear to be spaced to far apart.

[MSMBrush]

LiftNw8 thnx
i will change it again
thnx again