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    Wow, each update is a great improvement. His jawline looks a lot better but the bump under the front of his nose looks a bit droopy imho. His eyes look a bit off but I'm not exactly sure how. Maybe too hawkish but still it's looking really good.

    Frickin' hot my friend, keep it up.
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    very fine update...I have saved a few of these now to my screensavers...love your work.
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    Been scrolling between your last two posts, and it's hard to see exactly what you've changed .. but whatever it was, you've suddenly 'got' him. I'm going to grab a copy of both pics and study them at leisure, as I think there's a good bit of learning to be had here. Very nice work.

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    hi joebount,

    really nice work!

    from the angle of the render, my only nitpick is that his cheekbones seem
    too wide making his head look "blockier".

    cheers.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jit_gohil
    This is excellent, and deserves top row, but my crit is that the lower half of the face is a little wide - see the pic below:

    TomC.jpg

    Maybe the chin should be narrower too.
    Anyways, keep it up, excellent work!
    This is coming along really nicely. One thing that I noticed off the bat, is that if you look at the photo of Tom, the tops of his eyes really slope downward as they go outwards to the sides, whereas yours are very symmetrical, almost "almond" shaped. I think if you replicate that downward slope, a simple adjustment, will really send it forward by leaps and bounds.

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    Default My thoughts exactly

    I was going to say the same about the eyes. A minor adjustment that should really improve the likeness. Still great work

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    Default Best mouth

    Quote Originally Posted by joebount
    oooooook, never know when to stop, so just not now
    test_05.jpg
    I think that the slight smile in this one really helps with the likeness

    This is 99.9% there. Fix the eyes, and your done! One of the best models I have seen.

    Now how about those Light and Material settings??
    Last edited by Elixir; 06-24-06 at 09:06 AM.

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    wow i must say very nicely made ... well done..

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    now you can make tom do anything, like be in a good movie

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    your work is great

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    You need to tighten his eyes and brows. He has small tightly set eyes.
    Expand your View port.

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    Excellent model. My only criticism is, like others here, the jaw line. The angle of Cruise's jaw comes down much steeper, around 45 degrees in the photo. His head is tilted downwards which accentuates the angle but if you get more of that angle in your model you'll have it nailed.

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    Great modeling. I think try moving the eyes closer together and maybe tone down the highlight on them just a little bit. Overall cruise has a narrower looking face. I played around with the image in PS. Here is the side-by-side. What do you think?

    test_05paultmod.jpg

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    hey looks better, fix the eyes and it will fit perfectly..

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    This is an awesome job! I agree with mr martin, though. The jaw still looks a little too square. He's got a more triangular shaped jaw. The back of his jaw is higher in the photo in relation to his mouth. Nice work.

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