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    OK, one more try.....


    Javier, I add some subtle shadows to the roots/hair. What do you think? Better or worse?

    Either way, thanks for your suggestions and comments.

    Word.TreeShepherd2.jpg

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    Hey Word!

    It's looking good! This character it's really nice!
    I have some suggestions or ideas that maybe can help you with the whole desing. Also I took the picture to photoshop and tryed some of the shadows that I had in mind when I first saw your image, but first I wanted to ask for permission to do the changes and post it here and if is cool with you.

    Ok. I think that some of the textures you have around her face can be more blend in to the face. I mean by blend in, that you have the texture with less of a hard edge.(the ones around the eyes and chicks) Another that I saw that would be a good idea is the texture you have on the thicker roots, at the bottom. It would look cool if you continue that texture a little bit more farther and blend it in in a way that doesn't look repetitive.

    Ok Word keep the good work! Very inspiring artwork!

    Javier.

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    Default good!

    hehe - nice.

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