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    btw just ine thing; i find the face isnt distorted enough well the mouth in any case that what i think would need the most work

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    i think this is maximum for a realistic human face, already he looks very old :/
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    Very nice! Kinda matrix style Hmm.. now to the hard part :P

    If you watch in the mirror and open your mouth like that you wont get 2 big wrinkels you will only get 1..

    And i think you could put some work on the eyebrows too ..

    Otherwise very nice once again :P

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    when i oppen i get 2 :]
    but i ramade it any way :] Changed the mouth and the eyes, now they are bigger :]
    jantin and Malikus the black materials kicks ass
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    Default Neck surface detail, just a thought :)

    hey man, its excellent work you've got there. I think you might be planning to do this already but just a thought that came to mind no offense k !

    I think you might want to make the folds of the platysma on his neck a little less symmetrical and less convex in form, also hint at the masses below the platysma. I love how the lines flow together with the arteries extending from the heart shaped concave in his chest! Just think it would work better with some subtlety.

    Just my two cents , keep at it, I dig the concept and the expression totally.

    peace!

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    How did you want him to scream? Of fear or of rage ? As it looks now i think he screams most of rage. I was just wondering :P
    I wish i could make stuff like that... Very nice!

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