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    Default Arm Maintenance

    My latest piece I am currently working on.
    I always wanted to create something like this. Moving to texturing soon!

    Feedback and critique would be awesome!

    Thanks in advance!


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    Default Wonderful Piece

    Nice little scene you have so far. I like that the daughter is tinkering and has an eye piece to look at the pieces with. Spot on proportions by the way. My only constructive comment would be to start adding some extra details by slightly bowing some the floorboards. Add some more slight thickness to thin parts like the coffee cup could be thicker I think. But overall I think your almost in the home stretch. Your piece has a nice nostalgia I can't quiet put my finger on. Nice work I'll be following you in the future. Cheers!

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    Default Thanks for the feedback!

    @teddy007kong

    Thanks for the feedback, and sorry for the late reply.
    I am going to do some work on the floor, but probably a bit more in texturing.

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    Default Progress!

    After working on other projects, I finally returned to finish this piece.
    I feel I am getting there, but before I put this in my Winter showreel, I wanted to show this to you guys!

    Feedback and critique would be awesome!


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    Default With Background!

    Added a background to this piece!


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    awesome idea, I love the whole scene

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    Default nice

    I'm digging the background kitchen and foreground props. I think a stronger directional light streaming through the window would help direct the eye around the composition more. I understand its a work in progress. Nice job so far. A lot of nice little hints of detail I like.

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    thanks! For the feedback! I am sorry that I replying this late. Just realized that feedback messages may have gone to my trash mail without me realizing!
    Here is at least the finished piece


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