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    Been a longtime, this is my latest work on an alien character. Please write your critics and comments


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    nice design and the rendering came out great too. only the arms seem alittle bit too short but maybe it's just me.

    Keep it up

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    the arms seemed short to me also. but the hands end in the right place. i think it's the torso not being long enough - which is maybe exaggerated by the long neck. cool design and excellent render btw.
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    Pretty cool looking alien, it's definitely a good start. I agree with the others, something about his arms/hands seems odd. I think the pieces on his wrists are making his hands look weird, especially his right thumb. His chest also seems to be stretched a bit too wide. Keep it up!

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    Jagoro, magbhitu & skdzines - Thanks Much for the comments and critics. Regarding hands - i am uploading an image in a normal pose before i made the pose. May be it is because of the pose or angle of view. I am not sure though... if really we feel the same critic, definitely i am open to extend the hands to the right position. Once again thanks much for the comments and appreciation .


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    i'm getting 6.25 heads. - even with accounting for the long neck your torso seems short. you currently have about 3 heads in your legs and only 2.25 in your torso. i feel like this guy wants to be tall - like 8 heads maybe.


    i know it's a neutral pose but i'd fix the leaning forward that's going on in the side view. it might be contributing to the perceived awkwardness.
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