Cool. Do love a bit of pinup! Looks quite a bit like Shirley Manson, no bad thing. I love the balance you've struck between stylized and realistic, particularly on her cardigan.
A couple of crits:
-Her eyes look pretty unnatural, and a bit scary -- correct me if I'm wrong, but the iris looks like it's convex (although I guess it could be that there is too much refraction through the cornea piece...depending how you set up her eyes...)
-The bottom eyelashes seem too short compared with the top.
-The composition feels left-side heavy: all of the focal lines and position of the focal points are pushing my eye out of the left side of the image
And, although it probably falls under artistic licence, the pedant in me is having a problem with the elevator being at floor "Pd"
Good stuff, look forward to seeing more!
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