Newbie new work.

[belbe]

Hi everyone! Getting better in zbrush now, i´ll post here a model im doing for character sculpting in a group in facebook, not a big deal, but it is big for me hehehe first contest im in, here is render of the model face i tried to made a really dramatic expresion, all was done and render in zbrush!

[belbe]

Here is my final image.... well it seems no one like the last one xD. I hope i can receive some critique or something!. Thank you all!.

[nebular]

Heya It look preety cool for me but I have some crit.
I don't really understand the pose - She's pointing with a gun somewere up while she is looking at the ground. There's nothing she's looking at, maybe she's lost in reverie but taking a shot is preety dynamic thing.

I think it's too blurry and bright in some areas. I can't see clearry the picture.
Also the hair look tiny wet.

Hope this could help

[belbe]

Hi!!!

Nebular thank you very much for your critique,about the pose yea she was pointing a robot much bigger than her, but didnt got the time to sculp him, the thing is she didnt want it to kill him, so she was kinda lost in a reverie as you say, with a sad face the other pic is a close up to her face, but you are right the pose could have been more dynamic.

And about the blurr and bright oh lord you are right man, somehow i didnt saw how bad that blur and light was until now hahahaa. Thank you very much thank you for your critique!.

[belbe]

Hi again everyone, here i am again, this time i was playing with zbrush, did some kinda forest protector character, hope you guys like it and like everytime i will really appreciate some cc!!!!!

[belbe]

Hello everyone!!!

Well here is WIP of a game character that im doing, just for fun and practice. Sculpting face is done i think..... and now polypaint and final renders!!!
Hope to get more feedback this time, and hope you guys like it, like always please c&c help me become better artist! Thank you everyone!

[belbe]

Hello everyone!!!
Here's my latest sculpt, i did it in my free time for a project, still learning zbrush and sculpt, still a newbie
Hope this time a get some c/c, thank very much!!! See ya!.

[Blaine91555]

I'm not one of the Pro's, but to me it looks like your making steady progress.

My pencil drawings were good enough to earn me a scholarship I never used forty years ago though, so I can make suggestions.

Generally you can see yourself where you need improvement. What do you think is not right? Start there.

Worry about general form to begin with. Nice clean models without a lot of detail. After you get that down, the rest comes easier.

Spend time with real world things to learn and set aside the more creative stuff. Once you get believable results with that, then your creative side can come out and play and what you create will look real.

Invest in good tutorials and instruction. Use the free resources and follow along with lessons and tutorials.

References, references, references!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Practice, practice, practice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The face in the first image is great and very believable. You must be experienced in drawing? The character with the large arm is not so bad either. For just starting I'd say your doing fine.

Hope that was welcome, it seemed you wanted candid C&C. Like I said I'm no pro with ZBrush, but with art in general I think I'm sound. Everyone learns differently though, so no one set of advice will work for everyone. I like the work from big to small idea. If you can draw a circle freehand, you can create most anything I think. Mostly though have fun and don't sweat the other.

[belbe]

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Blaine91555 Thank you so much for your c/c, thank you!!!

Hi everyone, its me again, dont know if anyone cares about me posting.... im just a newbie, well, this time i bring you my version of steampunk batman!, i know i know another batman, and another steampunk batman is lame.

Hope to see what you guys think and some c/c, is still a WIP, need polypaint more details and a good render xD. Thank you everyone!.

[polaroid29]

Hey man, some nice sculpting going on! I'll be honest with ya though, it just looks like a steampunk character with really point ears. For redesigns like this, or even just designs in general, think about the story of the character as you're giving him different gadgets/clothes/goggles/weapons/whatever. What does anything in the design have to do with Batman? He is one of the most recognizable and popular characters of all time, so I think there are a million different ways you could go about redesigning while still keeping the character there. Give him some sweet-ass batarangs, an awesome utility belt, a bat suit that has cool steampunk or mech elements or whatever it is you want.

Anyway, just some stuff to think about .

On an unrelated note, his left leg looks totally broken

[MattSkinny]

I think you did a really good job with design and execution. And it's very ambitious for a newbie.
His chest alone says Batman to me, and you can never have enough Bats, or steampunk, for that matter
You're one of those newbies, where you can just see that they'll make great figures in the very near future, if they just stick to it.
So finish him, and then maybe concentrate on smaller and quicker sketches, to improve your skills further.
good job

[belbe]

Hi Everyone!!!!

polaroid29 thank you!, well i have to something to make him look more batman, and about the leg you are right! xD i alredy fix that, and fix the pose!. Thank you!

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MattSkinny thank you man for your kind words!!!!! I really happy that you like it! You think im doing good? Im still to insecure about myself, i'm finishing him right now, did not have much time to keep practicing, but ill keep doing my best, is what i want to do and do it for living!.

Here's a old model, that i take to practice some polypaint and to learn some render techniques in brush, hope you guys like it!! Like usual please some c/c!!!! Thank you all

[MattSkinny]

Yes, you're doing fine! Insecurity is a waste of time keep sculpting, if something turns out bad, shrug, and do another one! Which will be better.
Nice polypaint, cheers

[belbe]

Hello again everyone!!!!!

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MattSkinny Thank you!!!, and yes insecurity is a waste of time!!!.

Here's my new work, i tried to do something like a demon, flying demon, idk actually, that's what it came out from that hehehehe xD.

Hope you guys like it, and hope to get some c/c, thank you!!!!