Red Innocence

[KrisKelly3D]

I think its a great start, I am very impressed and can't wait until you finish.

First thing I see are how clean the eyes are, they are almost completely white. Making them a bit more yellow will help and also being able to see veins and the redness on the side. People connect with the eyes so spend time making sure they are right. I would take some time with the reflections also, that hot white spot definitely shouldn't be there and the wetness should come don't just a tad. I don't know know what your going to do for a background but i think a reflection of an environment in the eyes always helps.

I'm not sure what era she exist in, but the lips just seem flat, especially the reflection. Unless she is wearing lip gloss, then they would be super reflective.

Skins great in my opinion, can't wait to see more!

[Dekren]

Really nice start, Raj!

[rajbirD]

KrisKelly3D - Hi , You work is very inspiring and it has inspired me a lot. specially the revolution... Its fantastic. I wanted to send you a message long ago, but was just hesitating if you would reply or not.... never mind and here you are thanks for dropping by and feedback..

I totally agree with you on the comments you have made. the eyes can be better, I am in the process of learning how to work around with vray shaders and i am sorting things out. Hope i'll get hold of them soon I'll keep working on the eyes untill i get them looking right.

For her look i am kind of wanted to give her a pale skin and she is from old era , not too old... her cloth will be dirty and ragged, I think i will tone down the reflectivity on her lips, they look too fashion biased now, isnt it? Also the skin i think is too clean. Any idea what else i can add to the skin? . I was planning to add some freckles, they will help a lot

I will be adding feathers and hair beads to her hair as part of accessories. I am struggling with hair at the moment.

her background will not be black. i will add some environment later on.

For now my main concern is the eye area.

[rajbirD]

I dont really get time to work on it.
I have made some changes on the model I think its coming alone slowly.

I working on her eyes and made a sample feather. What do you think about it? Lemme know your thoughts. The feather looks convincing? or not?

Next on list is her accessories i think i will give some rest to skin and eyes for now and come back to them once i block out rest of her stuff.

thanks for popping by Lemme know how i can make it better, Any ideas are welcome.

[eof3D]

Awesome work on her face and eyes!

[SolidSnakexxx]

Wow..I'm so inspired.. Very beautiful work!

[midost]

Wow, she's very beautiful, great work!

To answer your question about the feather, it looks nice, but feels a tad bit like a cutout. Maybe just because it's surrounded by all that white hair. Also, what method were you going to use for the hair?

[Icemonkeyjr]

Brilliant pecie

[RageNrock]

She's Beautiful! Awesome Job!

[JoseConseco]

Damm, she looks fine.

[KrisKelly3D]

Yea, the more imperfections in the skin the older she will look. Look into women with sunburned skin. Her skin is far to pure to me in any kind of rugged or ancient environment, but don't beat yourself up about it to much, no one will complain if she is to beautiful, lol.

I must say I was liking the brown eyed girl better, but that is just me and it might be totally different once you have her in context.

[EricShawn]

This is just great!

Love it.

[tobbeo]

That is stunning... don't really have any feedback to give on this one, I really like what you did.

[Moths]

Beautiful work I enjoy her innocens

[yinshiuan]

Beautiful!