Red Innocence

[dapharmer]

the braids work well.. what may work a bit better is like yellehs said.. braid on one side instead of both... but what i'm thinking is that if the braid was in front, slightly thinner/tighter, and followed along with the flow of her face from center out... you can maintain the child-like nature but not detract from the face. if it helps frame the face it will keep everything together..

i think
.. this is a closer example of what im thinking :
http://blog.buy-straightener.com/wp-...tle-Braids.jpg or http://www.vfashiontrends.com/wp-con...nny-Braids.jpg

the models arent the best example for innocence but i think one of those style braids with your model would work well.


but really what matters most is what you think about it man.. it tis your work and it's good work

[Grimngor]

Hello.


I made some changes in her face structure. which one do you think is better. save image to your pc and flip between


I havent gamma corrected any of those. I just wanted to see what you guys think.


i think the new update looks more cute and innocent?

1 is OLD
2 is NEW

I personaly like more the second one, the new. I think it seems to be more mature but still inocent... Good job i any case.

[Grimngor]

One braid i think is the better, and for the hair i reccomend you harifarm.

[banyang]

very nice...texture

[rajbirD]

Thanks for the comments guys.

which one is looking nicer?

1. Both side hair with braids.
2. Single sided hair with thinner Braids.
3. Single sided hair with thicker Braids.

Feel free to give me more ideas

And i started to think about the Bg and FG possibilities.

[zber2]

I like #1 the best.

[Lunatic]

i agree, number 1# looks nicest, cause the hair frames the head evenly. aswell because the hair in general is made very nicely and looks convincing!

if i am allowed to nitpick, besides the modeling the hair looks right now the sharpest (best) then the skin and then the cloth

at this level, i would like to see some sharpness in transition in skin areas lips to cheek etc, better spec and roughness of areas would help

the cloth makes it look cg right now, i think you have to sell the material better, again some sort of noise/roughness and additional spec will make it sell better.

just my 2 cents and if i am unclear in what i said, please let me know and i will try to elaborate. my English is not the best

[digitalmind]

I vote for the first.Beautiful face and the hair are looking really nice

[ethanashton]

I think the one side with braid! I am not great at Zbrush yet but I can draw pretty good and I think I know when something is great so my opinion counts! lol

[rajbirD]

Some updates. I have been busy with work and i got some time last night to work on her scarf.
fixed some skin and also the cloth has normal map and also come fibres. may be they are nto visible
what do you guys think ?
i just feel may be her cloth texture is fighting focus? i mean her focus is more on cloth thatn her face?
advices?

[poda]

This is beautiful.

I do not find the fabric too distracting. I think putting the hair inside the scarf was a good call. For me, the braid drew more attention than anything else in the older version.

I do agree with the comment that some sharper areas on the skin would be helpful. Also I agree that it would be good to have a bit more surface bump and will add(?) that I think the fabric needs some subtle bump to make it feel a bit more natural. Just a hint of the fabric weave could go a long way.

While I don't find the fabric too distracting, since you do (and that is more important) I would suggest darkening the brighter red to lower the contrast between in the pattern.

[Angelblade]

Hi there buddy. I would say for me personally, I would maybe add some layers of dirt or stain and drop the saturation on the cloth to push it back. Maybe so tears. Otherwise choose a pattern with less repeats on it.

[Braga.3D]

This is coming along very nicely! I just love the softness or your work!
I can't see the normal on the scarf (but that might came from me ) and I think that the cloth texture might be a little too present on the image.
Indeed you might want us to focus more on the face and not on the cloth.

Anyway, keep the good work coming, and keep sharing it

[RJ the eccentric]

Nice work.

[asecbrush]

Beautiful!