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    hoping to get feedback on my artworkz, kthxbai

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    It seems like you're going for a stylized approach for the proportions, which is cool, but they're definitely wonky right now. His abs seems to narrow and the legs look small. There's also some wierd stuff going on with his upper back. it doesn't look right to me.
    But kudos on everything else, especially the hands. I suck at those.

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    Looks promising. I think the waist should be thinner in proportion to the torso. I agree with Tyrone on the upper back. Also maybe the feet could be longer, but it might be easier to see in a side view.

    I really enjoy the subtlety in the legs, the knee region in particular. The hands are ace too.

    Would be great to see where this goes.

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    starting up this thread again

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    this is awesome.
    fantastic
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    your 2 last works r a huge progress

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    Wow I'm really liking your progress anatomically.

    Your new attention to how the muscles interact is great.

    Keep posting, looking great.

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    thanks MAHAM + Bbyrnes


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    How your anatomy on the torso is SO much better in just the two sculpts you posted. Congrats!
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    Looks great man,

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    Quote Originally Posted by Clintus Maximus View Post
    How your anatomy on the torso is SO much better in just the two sculpts you posted. Congrats!
    I can just concur with Clintus, great improvement in your sketchbook pabgo, definently keep it going and stay motivated buddy!
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    Yup, just keep cracking away

    a good day,
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    Quote Originally Posted by Clintus Maximus View Post
    How your anatomy on the torso is SO much better in just the two sculpts you posted. Congrats!
    quoted for agreement, both in the representation of anatomy and the skill in the sculpt itself

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    @clintus thank you
    @rwilliamr thank you
    @KC thank you
    @hitch thank you
    cghub challenge, just need to pose now

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