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    Project for my class. So far, I think it needs more detail on body and gum. Not too sure though if the teeth should be bigger.


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    Some test poses




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    i think the size of the teeth are ok but you are right the gums need a little work. i dont know if this makes sense but, the gums need to wrap around each tooth and hold it in place.

    i dont know, i'm not a biologist and i dont sculpt animals
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    Nice progress! You realy captured the expression with the closed mouth.

    A little more work on gums & teeth
    Also the scars seem a little bloated. maybe make them a little thiner.

    will this be animated?
    Last edited by sadicus; 04-29-11 at 05:35 AM.
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    @robertrageson Thanks a lot for the comment, appreciate it!! So the teeth are fine? Cool cool. Will fix up the gum today, and I get what you mean.

    @sadicus Really appreciate the comment, thanks!! Will tighten up the scars. And my intention is to animate it.

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    Quick update with the gum. Think I will just model the whole skull to make it all look legit, since I'm not liking the view inside the mouth



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    Finished with the shark. This project also made me want to work on a character I had developed. Came about when I was talking about Street Sharks with someone at school

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    I'll tell ya, I wouldn't want to encounter that particular teenager in a back alley. Great job!

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    haha Nah, you'll be alright. He supposed to be a detective. Just forgot to draw in the badge. Thanks for the comment!!

    Here is where I'm at with him now.


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    Very nice! It's actually super close to the concept. Your missing the gills but I assume you haven't gotten to that part yet. Can't wit to see more.

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    both the shark and the sharkboy are looking incredible! the guy reminds me of street sharks if anyone remembers them haha

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    @Dmonk Thanks a lot, appreciate that. The gils, for some reason, I just find annoying. Don't think I will add them, but who knows.

    @testudinis haha heck yeah, street sharks is what started this guy. Good lord that show was terrible, but I always liked Slamu. Appreciate the comment!!!


    Quick update of where I got too:

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    Finished with him. Need to pose him and drop in a scene.


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    Looking good, but maybe you could push tshirt bit further, now looks like only extracted and some weird texture applied.

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