zpencil sketching

[curo]

Hi all
this is the second part of an older topic I have started one week ago using a wooooa-kome and zpencils.If you have any suggestion or comments let me know it.thank you in advance.
good zbrushing.
http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200311/user_image-1070242377xmb.jpg

[Fouad B.]

très bon curo!!

si je puis me permettre deux suggestions cependant.

la boursoufflure des paumettes me semblent descendre trops bas.
le menton semble court, ou sont-ce les ombres qui sont mal suggérées.

if I then to allow me two suggestions however. the boursoufflure of the paumettes seem me to go down too low. the chin seems short, or are this the shades which are badly suggested.

[curo]

Ouais tu as raison Fouad, tu as totalement raison meme : je vais essayer d y remedier. Merci beaucoup pour ces remarques, ca va me permettre d arranger tout ça.
A+ Fouad et bon brushing

Yep, Fouad ,you re right : I m going to try to solve this.Thanx a lot for your suggestions,they are going to enable me to improve all of this.
see you, good brushing

[Kitty]

Hi, and it is nice to meet you :)

Well, first off, I must tell you it has been a very long time since I have drawn.

So bear that in mind.

The hair is great, in my opinion it is perfect, and I know what you are striving for because of it.

The lips are ok, but they need work. They need to protrude further, and I think both upper and lower must be a bit fuller. And when a person smiles, the corners of the lips go into a dimple effect.

The left eye is perfect, I would not mess with that master piece. But the other eye is off, and I cannot name it. Not sure, but it appears that maybe the pupil is not as large as the other, or is it that the lighting is not reflecting off the iris as it does on the left one? The light is coming from the left and forward some, which creates the shadows under the hair which does not touch the skin. But I think more light would hit that right eye, and then you would need a larger highlight on the iris.

I have never used a Wacom, but will be getting one. I cannot imagine drawing and having to look at the screen and not where you are drawing. This must take a ton of practice. Hell, I barely can sign my name on UPS for this very reason.

You have also done a very good job on the nose. LOL a nose really can define feminity sometimes :D (But hey, that is only the body, all women are femine, just everyone expresses it differently)

I would kill for that hair :D

Have a good night

Many Blessings

[curo]

Thanx Kitty for that long,long, long reply full of interesting things (not only that,lol :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: )
You're right Kitty : I really must improve it : I ve made the right eye a little smaller than the left one because left part of the head is closer to us so I wanted to highlight this a little (kind of perspective,and the head is not facing 100% the "objective").I think my mouth is too low on the face and Kitty, you made me realise that the nose wasn't feminine enough.what I don't understand is that her real nose is feminine so I tell myself I ve made a mistake,lol.
Off course the lips need a lot of work : that s the most difficult part to draw I think and sometimes it becomes a nightmare that s why I just forgot the details,hahaha.
I really thank you for these pertinent comments Kitty :D :D :D
Don't hesitate buying a WAK Kitty, it's really intuitive and even for such a bad drawer like me you can have fun really fast with it : with texturing and modelling,also.And for PS : it becomes a real dream !!! I think it's good stuff :cool: :cool: :cool:
I hope to see you more often here Kitty and TY again for comments.
See ya

[rtyer]

Tres bon Curo!!!

[Frenchy Pilou]

Hi Curo
I think It's some difficult to Mix ZAdd On and Zadd Off !
It's more easy to paint a 2D portrait with Zadd off!
And abuse of the Smudger tool!
In any case cool portrait :cool:
Pilou

[curo]

Hi Pilou and all
I haven t used Zadd on :it's only a 2D portrait made with the zpencils alpha and smudge.I hope to have time to finish it one day but I have some boring things that I can't avoid doing.I wish to have more time to spend on this cool forum.
Have a good day(night pour les pilous)