"Come Over Here " Some Nudity - WIP, 121 Welcome

[WingedOne]

I haven't been around as much lately, since between being laid off and building a new computer system I've been kind of tied up. (I'm building a "briefcase computer" built around a mini-itx motherboard). :)

Anyway, This was something I was working on for the past couple of weeks off and on. I showed a more preliminary version to a couple of the people in ZBrush Chat last Tuesday.

The body was made from a ZSphere, the head was made from a 3d sphere. The hair was made from a 3d sphere with parts masked and hidden and I used the draw pointer on the hair to add in the hair details.

I thought I'd use unskinned ZSpheres for the boots. :)

The skirt, belt and necklace were made from the Gear3D tool.

I know I have to work on the index finger some and the hand that's resting on the knee might be a little too big. The heel of the boot is going through the floor, which I have to fix.

She's going to be holding something in here right hand (your left), in case anyone is wondering why it was posed like that. I haven't decided what, yet though.

I'll be putting a top on her eventually as well as more work on the environment and other details.

As always, any 121 welcome.

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1035761270fkx.jpg

[MrBraun]

As always well done WingedOne !! :D :tu:
Only 1 think for 121: add more specular to body skin !! :D :D
The girl have the smooth skin !! heheh
However great job into modeling and texturing !! :tu: :tu:

[Mahlikus The Black]

OKay some 121

:tu: Everything is really nice so far. Great lighting...modeling... ;) :D
Excellent W/O!

:td: The only thing I can see right now that pops out at me is that the arms are a bit too long. The elbow should be just above if not at the navel area and the wrist just at the crotch.
Another proportion guideline is that the foot is as long as the fore arm...don't believe me? Put your right foot on your left forearm between your wrist and the bend about the elbow. TADA!
Now this isnt really a problem. Like I said, everything looks kickin. The forearm lenght is all I can see thats throwing me off.
Thats all. Beautiful job WingedOne.

[Fouad B.]

come on!! :tu:

[wenna]

This is really good! I like it! :tu: :tu:

[DeeVee]

Excellent work. I like it a lot, especially the unique use of the ZSpheres for the boots.
Sorry about the lay off. I hope things work out for you. :) :tu: :tu: :tu: :tu:
DeeVee,
Joe

[drjjwow]

so far a masterpiece.. look forward the the final image.. and i would love how you did her breast so well. also which material did you modify to come up with that skin..

[juandel]

very seductive and what a classic pose! it might be my personal taste only, but i think her left (our right) upper leg is a bit too thin - and the bending of that knee/twist of lower leg (and i think the boot skin-line, too, but am not sure of that) would need a lil work as well - anyhoo, just may thoughts; in fact i cant wait to see another WingedOne masterpiece develop - thanks for sharing!

- juandel

[DM]

I like the way it is going, I will look in on further progress. :tu: :tu: :tu:
Dave

[banez]

121 the lower leg muscle looks out of place i guess from being twisted.
the lower knuckle she pointing with is to sunk in if you hold your hand in that pose the middle knuckle should stick out the most then the next one should be the one she pointing with the lower joint im not sure if thats called a knuckle.

the neck seams a little to long but not much.
the right forarm has a lump in it.
the eyes are to big for the socket.
the eye brow are to far away from the eye's
the finger next to the one she pointing with is the large finger but it apear its to small then the next one to that is larger switch them around look at the size of the pinkie finger and look at all of them and compare the size even the pinkey finger is the Fatest one.
her pose on the chair looks like she ready to fall off more then tiping a bit might want to scoot her up a bit and lean her more over.
The Boot Heal looks like its Stab in the floor.
right hand bottom knuckle go up to her wrist
just needs a tweek but i do like the pic. :tu:

[banez]

hey WingedOne i got a message from ONE person that thought i might of over 121 you i apploigize if it looked bad but it wasn't my entent as you can see in my last statement.
Personaly i think the pic in genral looks 95% percent there and that pretty good out of a 100
i just have a good eye for art thats all besides my own LOL
if you didn't ask for 121 i probley look at the pic and say hay thats pretty good but the lump on the forearm stood out thats about realy the main part the rest you have to look real hard to see it,,,
and when i see 121 i look hard LOL...
;)
i just didn't think it was bad me picking alot of things out compare lets say you had 30 replys and everyone had to add a thing ot 2 about it.
i was just being honest thats all.
pretty good pic honestly
:tu: :tu: