View Full Version : Femael face
07-16-09, 09:35 AM
An ongoing project Ive been working on
inspired my emma watson
I'll be glad to hear some comments here
<img src="http://www.zbrushcentral.com/upload/atn.gif"> (http://img154.imageshack.us/i/emmaa.jpg/)
Hiya bbbbarus (member.php?u=81862),
I'm interested to see your work, but you need to take another swing at attaching the pic.
07-17-09, 05:48 AM
great work .... oh wait, you didnt upload the pic ;f
07-17-09, 05:58 AM
Thumbnail looks great:)
please re upload.
Oh wow. Certainly one of the best Ive ever seen.:tu:
07-17-09, 06:04 AM
As if shes standing infront of me.
Im a little scared tho with all that sss on the ears there must be some
nuclear explosion behind her!
07-17-09, 06:07 AM
The face itself looks great, but it looks like it is occupying too much space on her head. That can of course differ based on the lens, but it makes the sculpt look a little off a I think.
grat, what render is that ?;]
07-17-09, 06:25 AM
awesome model and render!! 5 stars from me! <img src="http://www.zbrushcentral.com/upload/atn.gif"> (http://www.zbrushcentral.com/zbc/faq.php?faq=vb_read_and_post#faq_zbc_display_image s)
Beautiful... she reminds me of emma watson :D
A little asymmetry would help a lot here, now that she's so perfect it looks too artificial as well.
07-17-09, 06:55 AM
Thumbnail looks great
07-17-09, 07:18 AM
the shader is realy good...which one did you take? mental ray? or Vray? hope Vray ;)
the backscatter is a bit too much I think. the shoulder gets too red. but the colors are good...
yes, the face is too symetrical.
looking forwart to see the final !!!
07-17-09, 08:34 AM
I agree with pitchepuck on the redness in the shoulder. Further, I like your character a lot.
07-17-09, 09:05 AM
Yeah your scatter depth is a tad too high, that's why you're getting red in the shoulder.
See attached. I found a great front shot of her face. She definitely has an asymmetrical face. The left half of her mouth is a tad longer than the right, giving her a permanent little almost-smirk. Her left eye is a tad bigger. Her nose is slightly off, etc.
Looks great so far, keep up the good work.
Emma - eyes.jpg
07-17-09, 10:45 AM
Thank you guys for all the comments :D
I updated some stuff according to your suggestions also tried to render in a different color space
twichmonkey: I agree but someone suggested that the problem came from lack of volume to the hair so I hope that fixed that
Picthpuck:The shader is maya's fast skin rendered in mentalray
Dustinbrown: I have this pic and many more, although I'm not trying to achieve likeness the points you made will be very helpful in getting greater realism
07-17-09, 11:50 AM
Dustin, is that pic for real? Sick.
Going to take a long look at the wound thread in the community forum to heal my eyes.
07-17-09, 12:11 PM
wow!! very very beaultifull this photo!=)
07-17-09, 01:07 PM
thats very nice work man
i guess eyes shader need more tweaking
may i know how u get this nice results of the hair?
07-18-09, 12:22 AM
While I can't really tell what us different between the two pictures, things do seem to work a bit better in the second render. It's subtle, but somehow more realistic.
@silvaticus: You mean because of the hairs? People, even female people are covered in hairs, you just can't see them unless you've got a really clear shot. Unless they're dark, which luckily hers aren't.
07-18-09, 10:57 PM
Here is my latest update
I tweaked almost everything such as eyes. eyelashes. textures. render .model
Hope you like it
I think It looks less like emma but I'm ok with that :cool:
07-18-09, 11:49 PM
I feel like each new version makes her look a little older. The first one looks youngest. Last one oldest.
07-19-09, 12:34 AM
i would like to see this without the texture and the sss
looks good, but lighting is too symmetrical and boring, need key light to your left or right to highlight one side to make it bit more interesting.
07-19-09, 08:30 AM
Dustin : You might be right I think it because the eyes are smaller but non the less i don't think its bad emma is to young
Spaceboy: i'll upload some screen from zbrush soon;)
Kravit : You're right I did play with that but I am aiming for realism and if you look at ppl photos the lightning is almost always "boaring" but I think It can get more intersting than it is now
looks amazing, very realistic, i think maybe the eyebrows are too similar though
great job man! I look forward updates
07-20-09, 01:41 AM
She looks real nice. Cool render too. I like use of DoF. Looks a bit like the sfumato portrait technique. Looking forward to updates :tu:
11-06-09, 10:09 PM
yeah dustin i have to ask , and i agree with silvaticus
is this last photo real ??
and if so , then Oo wow its not creepy its actually cute
for the rest of the EW fans out there, the homepage is an amazing asortment of images and information.
and keep up the good work i cant wait to see more
11-06-09, 11:38 PM
Very nice work , resemblence is also the with the texture its looking more good !!!
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