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bbbbarus
07-16-09, 09:35 AM
An ongoing project Ive been working on
inspired my emma watson
I'll be glad to hear some comments here



<img src="http://www.zbrushcentral.com/upload/atn.gif"> (http://img154.imageshack.us/i/emmaa.jpg/)

Stan
07-17-09, 05:32 AM
Hiya bbbbarus (member.php?u=81862),

I'm interested to see your work, but you need to take another swing at attaching the pic.

bbbbarus
07-17-09, 05:48 AM
Emma.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27149281%27,%27Emma.jpg%27,1,0%2 9)

slocik
07-17-09, 05:50 AM
great work .... oh wait, you didnt upload the pic ;f

montyband
07-17-09, 05:58 AM
Thumbnail looks great:)
please re upload.

Dman3d
07-17-09, 05:59 AM
Oh wow. Certainly one of the best Ive ever seen.:tu:

Disco Stu
07-17-09, 06:04 AM
As if shes standing infront of me.
Im a little scared tho with all that sss on the ears there must be some
nuclear explosion behind her!

Twitchmonkey
07-17-09, 06:07 AM
The face itself looks great, but it looks like it is occupying too much space on her head. That can of course differ based on the lens, but it makes the sculpt look a little off a I think.

slocik
07-17-09, 06:24 AM
grat, what render is that ?;]

wethand
07-17-09, 06:25 AM
awesome model and render!! 5 stars from me! <img src="http://www.zbrushcentral.com/upload/atn.gif"> (http://www.zbrushcentral.com/zbc/faq.php?faq=vb_read_and_post#faq_zbc_display_image s)

ISK-86
07-17-09, 06:44 AM
Beautiful... she reminds me of emma watson :D

LY
07-17-09, 06:50 AM
A little asymmetry would help a lot here, now that she's so perfect it looks too artificial as well.

andy.chen
07-17-09, 06:55 AM
Thumbnail looks great
5 star

pitchepuck
07-17-09, 07:18 AM
the shader is realy good...which one did you take? mental ray? or Vray? hope Vray ;)
the backscatter is a bit too much I think. the shoulder gets too red. but the colors are good...
yes, the face is too symetrical.
looking forwart to see the final !!!

JasonKing
07-17-09, 08:34 AM
I agree with pitchepuck on the redness in the shoulder. Further, I like your character a lot.
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dustinbrown
07-17-09, 09:05 AM
Yeah your scatter depth is a tad too high, that's why you're getting red in the shoulder.

See attached. I found a great front shot of her face. She definitely has an asymmetrical face. The left half of her mouth is a tad longer than the right, giving her a permanent little almost-smirk. Her left eye is a tad bigger. Her nose is slightly off, etc.

Looks great so far, keep up the good work.

-Dustin

Emma - eyes.jpg

bbbbarus
07-17-09, 10:45 AM
Thank you guys for all the comments :D

I updated some stuff according to your suggestions also tried to render in a different color space

twichmonkey: I agree but someone suggested that the problem came from lack of volume to the hair so I hope that fixed that
Picthpuck:The shader is maya's fast skin rendered in mentalray
Dustinbrown: I have this pic and many more, although I'm not trying to achieve likeness the points you made will be very helpful in getting greater realism

Emma-A-009.jpg (javascript:zb_insimg('149312','Emma-A-009.jpg',1,0))

silvaticus
07-17-09, 11:50 AM
Dustin, is that pic for real? Sick.

Going to take a long look at the wound thread in the community forum to heal my eyes.

3dzeiro
07-17-09, 12:11 PM
wow!! very very beaultifull this photo!=)

3d70mohamedaly
07-17-09, 01:07 PM
thats very nice work man
i guess eyes shader need more tweaking

may i know how u get this nice results of the hair?

Twitchmonkey
07-18-09, 12:22 AM
While I can't really tell what us different between the two pictures, things do seem to work a bit better in the second render. It's subtle, but somehow more realistic.

@silvaticus: You mean because of the hairs? People, even female people are covered in hairs, you just can't see them unless you've got a really clear shot. Unless they're dark, which luckily hers aren't.

bbbbarus
07-18-09, 10:57 PM
Here is my latest update
I tweaked almost everything such as eyes. eyelashes. textures. render .model
Hope you like it
I think It looks less like emma but I'm ok with that :cool:

ZBCTHUMB_01.jpg
Emma-A-010.jpg

dustinbrown
07-18-09, 11:49 PM
I feel like each new version makes her look a little older. The first one looks youngest. Last one oldest.

spaceboy412
07-19-09, 12:34 AM
i would like to see this without the texture and the sss

Kravit
07-19-09, 04:48 AM
looks good, but lighting is too symmetrical and boring, need key light to your left or right to highlight one side to make it bit more interesting.

bbbbarus
07-19-09, 08:30 AM
Dustin : You might be right I think it because the eyes are smaller but non the less i don't think its bad emma is to young
Spaceboy: i'll upload some screen from zbrush soon;)
Kravit : You're right I did play with that but I am aiming for realism and if you look at ppl photos the lightning is almost always "boaring" but I think It can get more intersting than it is now

matb
07-19-09, 11:00 AM
looks amazing, very realistic, i think maybe the eyebrows are too similar though

max-tx
07-19-09, 03:13 PM
great job man! I look forward updates

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Captain Sensible
07-20-09, 01:41 AM
She looks real nice. Cool render too. I like use of DoF. Looks a bit like the sfumato portrait technique. Looking forward to updates :tu:

jaganar
11-06-09, 10:09 PM
yeah dustin i have to ask , and i agree with silvaticus
is this last photo real ??

and if so , then Oo wow its not creepy its actually cute

http://www.oclumencia.com.br/galeria/displayimage.php?album=648&pos=2

for the rest of the EW fans out there, the homepage is an amazing asortment of images and information.

and keep up the good work i cant wait to see more

Jag

kunalsarkar1984
11-06-09, 11:38 PM
Very nice work , resemblence is also the with the texture its looking more good !!!