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Wizo
05-28-09, 06:53 PM
Hey guys,

Heres my dominance war's entry, any C&C is appreciated and it was a real pleasure to participate in this war with so much talent.



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Joecyriac
05-28-09, 09:31 PM
I like the clean lines in your character. Overall, he could use some more grime and dirt in my opinion. Great job finishing, and amazing character design sheets.

Kravit
05-28-09, 11:19 PM
This is awesome, I like wacky cool clothing designs.

fattkid
05-29-09, 12:26 AM
Hey man, really nice work. I'd say everything is quite well done, but the arm anatomy is off, particularly the forearm/bicep insertion area. The groin/pelvis/waist proportion/structure seems kinda funky too. A bit elongated. I'm being kinda picky cuz this is quality work. Nice presentation and props for the nice 2D work as well.

Mind Symbion
05-29-09, 01:30 AM
Nice sculpt Wizo! ;)

wolfsoull
05-29-09, 02:27 AM
Really nice work!! :tu:

euge
05-29-09, 03:27 AM
nice work, kinda reminds me a bit of mirrors edge in style.
i prefer the bright orange colours in your concept, gives it some contrast.

Wizo
05-29-09, 04:52 AM
Joecyriac - I also think adding dirt is one aspect I need to improve on, I will keep this in mind for my futurs projects.Thx!

Kravit - Thanks!! I want to be character concept artist later on :), Im super glad you liked the design. :D

fattkid - Very good eye, to be honest these are the areas I always mess up, even with 2D drawing hehe. I will start sculpting with more references and try to make something more correct in anatomy. Thanks for the advice!

Mind Symbion - Thanks!

wolfsoull - Cheers!

euge - Thanks euge! I removed the orange swirl in case it looked to much like the cgland logo :( . I think I have been influenced by Mirrors Edge quite a lot, something about clean and vivid colors is really appealing to me.