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raguyarts
01-04-09, 11:29 AM
Hi everyone!

It's my first contest on this forum , this is going to be fun and I'm sure it'll be instuctive

Entry by: Eric Randrianarison.

Action Hero – The Whipman
Real name – Jarod Wesley

Background


The Whipman.

Child of divorced diplomats born in Hong Kong, Jarod Wesley was able to develop his unusual telepathic capacities (not familiar in the west) thanks to the Asian monks who dealt with his education: he became expert in martial arts (in particular in the handling of the whip chain), and furthermore, he learned to control this power which enables him to paralyse a living being temporarily.
Once returned to the USA , he joined the Marines where he was recruited for the secret program of the American administration in the Zone 51, in the AFA (Agent For Action). These Agents were destined for undercover missions “to influence” in the important strategic decisions in the politico-economic fields in the world. He was considered as the best element of its cell. Jarod was given a “special” mission: to eliminate an oil tycoon which supports the presidential candidate against the outgoing one. By refusing this mission, he became a fugitive. To thwart the drawings of the secret organization, he decides to act wearing a mask… including against the bandits which he randomly crosses during his escapes. Very quickly the media seize this super hero who controls these gangsters with his weapon: the whip chain, by calling him the Whipman.


Powers
Telepathy
Paralyse the enemy
Abilities:
Martial arts
Super Strength
Jump
Favorite Weapon:
Chain Whip
COMICS18bis.jpg

maxinkuk
01-04-09, 02:45 PM
Wonderful rendering of your concept art. Could be a trading card. Hey, that's an idea, the cards of the heroes! I could then slip them in next time my nephew asks me to play a game of Pokemon.
Good luck with your entry, if your modeling and sculpting is half as good as what you display in 2d art then it'll be well worth following.
Cheers.

SolidSnakexxx
01-04-09, 06:41 PM
Cool concept sketch. Look forward to your Zsculpt :)

dustbin1_uk
01-05-09, 01:32 AM
Wow! nice concept!!!

Drakelot
01-06-09, 08:31 AM
Can't wait for the model ... xcellent concept drawing :tu:

ISK-86
01-06-09, 08:59 AM
Welcome to the contest :)

Your concept looks really great... think that we will learn a lot from you :cool:

raguyarts
01-09-09, 03:00 AM
Thank you guys for your kind words.

Maxinkuk - Fancy, I have myself a little nephew (10 year) who plays Pokemon cards. He asked me to create some invincibles fake cards uh, uh, uh!

ISK-86 - we never stop learning through each other ;)

Here is my BaseMesh

(http://www.zbrushcentral.com/zbc/attachment.php?attachmentid=&stc=1)JarodBASE1.jpg

SolidSnakexxx
01-09-09, 03:04 AM
Wow, the progression from the ZSphere construct to the adaptive skin and then sculpt are really impressive! Love what you have so far :tu: :tu:

petekasim
01-09-09, 03:12 AM
Welcome to the contest, things are really hotting up in here...

I love that concept piece, superb stuff. I like the story, too, good solid action hero stuff with a modern twist.

Basemesh looking very solid so far, I'm eager to see how this progresses :tu:

Good luck!

raguyarts
01-11-09, 06:09 AM
Thanks for your nice comments.

This is an little Update
I did hair with a Sphere3D because there is not enough Polygon on the head..I put them together before making the retopology
JarodHEAD.jpg

SolidSnakexxx
01-11-09, 06:15 AM
Nice update... the close up shot of the head's really awesome...very heroic comic style... :tu: You've got some serious sculpting skill :)

Frenchy Pilou
01-11-09, 07:33 AM
...the guy ! :D

PS Seems I have yet seen a Raguy before in another places! :D :lol:

raguyarts
01-12-09, 09:46 AM
SolidSnakexxx - Thank you!
Pilou - (Chut! je suis en mission secrète ) I am going to tell you a secret, keep it for you, Believe it or not... I AM the Whipmanhttp://www.3dvf.com/forum/images/perso/2/patou2.gif

I've just finished the boring part today, the retopology.
JarodRETOPOLOGY.jpg

animastur
01-12-09, 10:11 AM
I like the sketch. :)
But I think the logo and weapon need a little work more to get punch...

SolidSnakexxx
01-12-09, 06:50 PM
Wow, raguyarts, you are fast...the topo work's in excellent shape as well. :tu: :tu:

Harmonic
01-12-09, 08:50 PM
Hey great work so far! I really like the head close up, looks a bit like Gambit.

Webhead
01-12-09, 09:07 PM
Nice costume design. :tu:

alexis flamand
01-14-09, 01:42 AM
Great great job, Rag !
You're our super-heros WIP-man !
Model is great, and the cartoon rendering is a must.
I can wait for the fight Whipman VS ZBman.

Alexis

raguyarts
01-14-09, 05:02 AM
animastur - I like the logo the way it is, but it's true, I should reduce his weapon a little bit,thanks for your crits. ;)

SolidSnakexxx - Harmonic - Webhead - thanks so much for your comments.

alexis flamand - No no no, Whipman & Dr Alexis Flamand ( Aka ZBman ) are Friends they are fighting together against this vilain Pilouman :lol:

It is for a static image, so I decided to break the symetric from the start and to give its position to the character (like for a traditionnal sculpture). I prefer to deal that way with each part of the body in motion.

ZBrush Document16.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27122229%27,%27ZBrush%20Document16.jpg%27,1,0%29)
ZBrush Document15.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27122230%27,%27ZBrush%20Document15.jpg%27,1,0%29)
ZBrush Document20.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27122231%27,%27ZBrush%20Document20.jpg%27,1,0%29)
ZBrush Document14.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27122232%27,%27ZBrush%20Document14.jpg%27,1,0%29)

I have started the posture with the Rigging Zspheres (http://raguyarts.blogspot.com/2009/01/videos-transpose.html) of zbrush, other videos on the Transpose are coming soon.

raguyarts
01-15-09, 10:19 AM
Little update.
My final image will look like this, the Whipman with his favorite Weapon.
ZBrush Document23.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27122458%27,%27ZBrush%20Document23.jpg%27,1,0%29)

JUPITER
01-15-09, 10:29 AM
WoW! that's a cool way to make the head.Looking forward to seeing more!!!!

threetails
01-15-09, 11:30 AM
this looks like a fun concept, nice work with the transpose and retopo. look forward to seeing this one.

goldo_O
01-15-09, 11:40 AM
Cool pose Raguyarts! It's coming along very nicely! Bon courage pour la suite! :tu:

SOLcreator
01-15-09, 01:00 PM
Nice work with your Whipman, I especially like the headpiece and hair.

I look forward to seeing more :lol:

- SOL

SolidSnakexxx
01-15-09, 06:47 PM
Nice pose...I like it more when the whip's added. :tu: May be a bit of twisting torso would imply more force. :)

sagiarts
01-15-09, 07:39 PM
Cool thats neat and fast

sazar26
01-15-09, 08:04 PM
sweet concept and i see your fast at sculpting good job he is looking really cool so far in that pose

raguyarts
01-18-09, 10:01 AM
Thanks you guys for your nice comments.

SolidSnakexxx - You're right , i would see later... thank you for your interest.

I`ve worked on the face, i think the head is finished. I will put his glasses later.

ZBrush Document42 copie.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27123022%27,%27ZBrush%20Document42%20copie.jpg%27,1,0%29)

GregStrangis
01-18-09, 10:05 AM
Looking good, very clean :tu: My only crit would be that his nose is a little too small from a side profile view. Otherwise keep going :D

cmoffitt
01-18-09, 10:35 AM
Looking cool and I really like how you approached the hair! I also agree with Greg that the nose looks a bit flat from the side. Maybe pull the tip out a bit. Keep up the good work!

mkk316
01-18-09, 10:41 AM
I thought it was Gambit at first. lol. But really nice work so far, I agree with the others the nose does seem a bit small.

maxinkuk
01-18-09, 10:43 AM
It's very expressive, with nice features and personality. Excellent job.
What still needs adjusting are the teeth. Especially the bottom teeth. They should be bigger and follow the curve of the jaw ending halfway from where they are now and the ear.

raguyarts
01-20-09, 01:10 PM
OK! I totally agree with you guys and reworked the nose.
Here's a little update, Thanx!
ZBrush Document44.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27123471%27,%27ZBrush%20Document44.jpg%27,1,0%29)

sasquatchpoacher
01-20-09, 01:24 PM
very clean. cant wait to see the finished product.

gregoconn
01-20-09, 02:56 PM
this is looking really nice and you have a good design. Very gambit like, and I love gambit :)

SolidSnakexxx
01-20-09, 06:40 PM
Nice facial sculpt there...I like the updated version too..the previous face looks a bit cat like (Nose bridge's a bit too flat) But now all's just great. Excellent skill you possess. :tu: Look forward to more pose :)

raguyarts
01-21-09, 10:33 AM
Thank you guys for your kind words.

Here is a new update.
The body is almost finished, now I start drawing the elements of the clothes.

ZBrush Document49.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27123620%27,%27ZBrush%20Document49.jpg%27,1,0%29)
ZBrush Document48.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27123621%27,%27ZBrush%20Document48.jpg%27,1,0%29)

wethand
01-21-09, 11:01 AM
looks like a very clean sculpt!

keep up the nice progress!

raguyarts
01-28-09, 01:05 PM
Thank you wethand !

I have just finished the motives of the clothes, details and folds of his outfit are coming soon.

ZBrush Document58.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27125159%27,%27ZBrush%20Document58.jpg%27,1,0%29)
ZBrush Document57.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27125160%27,%27ZBrush%20Document57.jpg%27,1,0%29)

Captain Sensible
01-28-09, 01:20 PM
That's really nice. Good overall design. I like the pose. Looking forward to more updates :tu:

SolidSnakexxx
01-28-09, 06:43 PM
Cool pose, raguyarts. This is coming along wonderfully. Very good design :)

raguyarts
01-30-09, 01:09 AM
Thank you guys ;)

The details aren't quite finished, I am just testing the colours to see how it looks like.
ZBrush Document59.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27125431%27,%27ZBrush%20Document59.jpg%27,1,0%29)
ZBrush Document60.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27125432%27,%27ZBrush%20Document60.jpg%27,1,0%29)

snoopalu
01-30-09, 03:50 AM
wow good model i like how it looks so far

SolidSnakexxx
01-30-09, 08:34 AM
Nice color work. He's looking good. And the black material is quite cool with some specular in it :cool:

boblenain
01-31-09, 10:49 AM
Hi! great job you did!
Nice to know you now that I met you at Eyrolles today ;)

I like your hero but maybe I would have change the standing, I feel like he's more dancing than fighting some evil guy (me for example!)

Despite that point it's a good choice you made for the colors.

raguyarts
02-02-09, 06:41 AM
snoopalu - Thank you !

SolidSnakexxx - Thank you for your nice comments!

boblenain - I was also delighted to meet you.
Actually, the movement of his arms can be considered like a pre-fighting movement in his Chain Whip technics. As for his legs, it is just a comics classical gesture.
Merci pour les commentaires.;)


Here is another update with more details.
ZBrush Document70.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27125879%27,%27ZBrush%20Document70.jpg%27,1,0%29)

raguyarts
02-03-09, 09:42 AM
Update…the Whipman glasses, i made it with Zspheres, and painting with only Matcaps.

ZBrush Document71.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27126118%27,%27ZBrush%20Document71.jpg%27,1,0%29)

Making of Glasses.

LUNETTES_textures.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27126120%27,%27LUNETTES_textures.jpg%27,1,0%29)
ZSpheres and Retopology

LUNETTES2.jpg (http://javascript%3cb%3e%3c/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27126119%27,%27LUNETTES2.jpg%27,1,0%29)

AVTPro
02-03-09, 09:49 AM
Wow!! you really pulled that character out!!

spimmy
02-03-09, 11:03 AM
Wow, really awesome. I love the outfit, the glasses, the texture, details...well pretty much everything :) :tu:

boblenain
02-04-09, 12:52 AM
Sorry for all the things that I said : it's getting better, the googles make it less "mister nice guy"

Can't wait to see the whip!

Captain Sensible
02-04-09, 02:44 AM
The face and goggles are top notch! :tu:

SolidSnakexxx
02-04-09, 06:42 AM
Wow, the update's awesome..I really like the goggles especially after the material applied :tu: great work there.

raguyarts
02-05-09, 06:37 AM
Thank you guys for your kind words.:tu:
Here comes the Chain Whip
ZBrush Document92.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27126390%27,%27ZBrush%20Document92.jpg%27,1,0%29)


Making of Chain Whip
MAKING OF chain2.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27126391%27,%27MAKING%20OF%20chain2.jpg%27,1,0%29)



My videos "transpose" youtube are now on line
Transpose1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zXWu_JLzc48)
Transpose2 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DjL5o2u-Vfs)

SolidSnakexxx
02-05-09, 06:48 AM
Really cool process to create the whip chain... Excellent pose as well :tu: :tu:

threetails
02-05-09, 07:48 AM
nice work, the retopo and intitalizing of the primitives is somthing i need to do more of. thanks for sharing.

Jason Belec
02-05-09, 08:36 AM
I must say that I love the style you captured for this character! I started digging through some stuff in the morgue, and the memories of youth and all those images handed down from my dad in comics, marketing material, etc., flooded back. Thanks, I hope 50'sKID is seeing all this. ROFL ;)

raguyarts
02-09-09, 07:15 AM
SolidSnakexxx - Thank you again for taking a look

threetails - Thank you for the nice words

Jason Belec - Anyway thank you for the encouragement ;)

Update with some more details
ZBrush Document112.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127028%27,%27ZBrush%20Document112.jpg%27,1,0%29)


Here are the making of belt
Making_of_Belt.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127029%27,%27Making_of_Belt.jpg%27,1,0%29)

Derek Frenzo
02-09-09, 07:25 AM
I like this guy very much. The only change I would make is the head. His head looks a tad big for his body. He would look more heroic with a slightly smaller head.

monstermaker
02-09-09, 09:01 AM
I like it . Lots of nice details nice pose . I really enjoyed seeing you process. thanks for sharing.

SolidSnakexxx
02-09-09, 09:17 AM
Nice work on the belt! :tu: Really great progress going!

Malleable man
02-09-09, 10:01 AM
Great classic style. I love the accesory work. The chain whip is great. Do you think it will come out in a 3D print? Keep going!

Regards, James.

Marsyas
02-09-09, 07:14 PM
Nice work! The pose and outfit are really nice. I like how you made his gear.

chindian
02-09-09, 07:19 PM
wow... very awesome indeed... I really like the style of this one! Best of luck in the competition! Looking forward to seeing the final!

raguyarts
02-11-09, 01:58 PM
Derek Frenzo - Maybe it's because of his hair, anyway I will increase the size of the body a little bit...thanks for your crits.

monstermaker - SolidSnakexxx - Marsyas - chindian - Thanks you guys for your nice comments.

Malleable man - I will insert a long cylindric stem between his left foot and the base to reunite them. I hope it will be fine that way. Thanx

Statuettes4bis.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127582%27,%27Statuettes4bis.jpg%27,1,0%29)

SolidSnakexxx
02-11-09, 07:01 PM
Nice update to the model. He's looking so classic and cool. I look forward to see the final piece! :tu:

Frenchy Pilou
02-12-09, 10:21 AM
...l'artiste! :cool:

raguyarts
02-12-09, 11:48 AM
Here are my final Images.

I created each element of these images in Zbrush and Photoshop
I used Polypainting to colorize them.

It's a weird creature who is grabbing him in the "Area 51", normally he escapes and jumps, but actually, it's only an excuse to link him to the base of the sculpture :D.

Hope you like it.



The-Whipman-raguyarts2.jpg (http://javascript%3cb%3e%3c/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127747%27,%27The-Whipman-raguyarts2.jpg%27,1,0%29)

Whipman-Front.jpg (http://javascript%3cb%3e%3c/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127749%27,%27Whipman-Front.jpg%27,1,0%29)

Whipman-Back.jpg (http://javascript%3cb%3e%3c/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127750%27,%27Whipman-Back.jpg%27,1,0%29)

Whipman-Side.jpg (http://javascript%3cb%3e%3c/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127751%27,%27Whipman-Side.jpg%27,1,0%29)





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Just for fun! :D




Whipman-Bac1.jpg (http://javascript%3cb%3e%3c/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%27127752%27,%27Whipman-Bac1.jpg%27,1,0%29)





Good luck to all the others. :tu: