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Slimspoonful
12-23-08, 12:58 PM
Hey All,
Gonna see if I can put the time in and get an entry done.
Name: Matt Berenty
Entry: The Pigeon Lady
Backstory:
Though her name has been forgotten her story remains clear. Once a loving mom from midwest pennslyvania, she was driven mad when her daughter was murdered in central park NYC, her killer never being found. She became convinced that only she could find the killer and carry out the vengence she feels her daughter deserves. Her drive became an obsession as she stalked the park, but to no avail as her daughters killer was gone. Alone in her solitude she was befriended by the pigeons whose feeding had became the one bright spot in her life. Upon learning that there loyalty to her was absolute, she decided to stalk the park preventing the violence with her avian friends so that others would not have to go through what she has. Her years have twisted her though and she fights all crime with the same brutal force. So beware that she does not find you participating in activities she finds offensive or you may find yourself in one sticky situation.
Look forward to hearing your comments
Cheers
Matt
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HAHA! YES! I can totally see her sending her pigeons to swarm and **** all over a bad guy! Would look great as an animation too. I like your pose. Good Luck.
SolidSnakexxx
12-23-08, 07:14 PM
The pose of her commanding pigeons is great.. Good concept as well!
I really love this entry. She actually looks like a woman who feeds pigeons in a park near me (without the mask!) Can't wait to see more of this.
Slimspoonful
12-23-08, 11:42 PM
Thanks guys. Hope to really start sculpting tomorrow and will update with WIP as soon as I can.
Cheers,
Matt
Captain Sensible
12-24-08, 03:47 AM
Hahaha... love it. The story really tells itself and the final pic will be fun. Keep us updated :)
Lucky_1
12-24-08, 09:43 AM
She looks so cool !
do the pigeons help her in her quests against evil ?
Keep it up !
oli-chan
12-24-08, 12:51 PM
I hate pigeons, flying-rats! :)
But I love the look on the ladies face and her pose, so determined, so hero-like! ;)
Slimspoonful
12-25-08, 10:52 PM
Hey Guys,
The holidays are a hardtime to work on this stuff but I've put every spare moment I've had. I'll be able to comment more on everyone else stuff more in the coming weeks but for now just enough time to update. Thanks for all your comments past and future.
I'll state now that I've used an imported basemesh which I created a long time ago based off one of those gnomon DVDs(though I do want to state that it is a mesh that I made myself). With time constraints it was easier for me.
I've done the base bodymass blocking. Then I went ahead and used transpose to pose her I'm about 80% on the pose right now so all comments are definitely welcome. Her balance may be a bit off and I'll touch it up some in the morning. As the hands hadn't been fully blocked yet I've left those unposed for the moment but will take care of those when I do my final tweaks.
Cheers and I hope all had a merry christmas,
Matt
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JUPITER
12-25-08, 11:06 PM
Yes this is really cool stuff..I really like the pose to..Keep up the good work and looking foward to new posts.. :D
dismantled
12-25-08, 11:23 PM
this is looking wonderful...
reminds me of home alone. lost in Newyork.. but your character is much cooler than that...
SolidSnakexxx
12-26-08, 09:41 AM
The pose in your attachment looks right on. :tu:
Lucky_1
12-26-08, 04:10 PM
Great start on the modeling !
Up up ;)
I follow you! Good luck! :tu: :D
DAnconia
12-27-08, 11:33 PM
Great pose and basemesh!! Looking forward to this one being completed.
maxinkuk
12-28-08, 08:52 AM
She's lots of fun, and I love your posed model. It'll be a very original entry.
dustbin1_uk
12-29-08, 05:09 AM
Ha ha ha! An original and funny entry!
Great concept drawing there too!
:lol: :lol: I think this is the most original super-hero I've seen in my whole life... Your'e insane, and I like that kond of minds... waiting to see your progress....
La locura, a veces, no es otra cosa que la razón presentada bajo diferente forma.
(Insanity sometimes Is no other thing than the reason in a different way)
Slimspoonful
01-02-09, 12:14 AM
Hey Guys,
Very tough time of the year to be working on this stuff, but now that the holidays are over I think we'll all have a bit more time to spend on this stuff. Anyways finally got back to blocking out her face. Its roughed in petty well now and think I 'll move onto the rest of the body and accessories before fleshing it out anymore.
Cheers,
Matt
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Malleable man
01-02-09, 01:01 AM
I wanted to post a reply to this entry prior to the holidays but time ran out.
I think it rocks.
I am a huge fan of Pixar and its works, and I could see 'The Pigeon Lady' winding up in the next Incredibles movie as a villian.
Great style.
My favorite in the whimsical category.
Regards, James.
Nice! I was wondering if anyone would go with a more stylised character. Looking forward to more from this one ...
Slimspoonful
01-02-09, 06:54 PM
Hey Guys,
I fleshed out her body to a point where I am now going start adding some clothes(or start her hair), though I might tweak out her pose just a slight bit more. Her forward leg does not seem to carry her weight quite enough for my taste. Opinions on this would be more then welcome.
Cheers,
Matt
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SolidSnakexxx
01-02-09, 08:33 PM
I really like her pose. Staying true to the concept art. Look forward to when she has her hair, props..and pigeons :)
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Great idea! Looking forward to this one.
sazar26
01-10-09, 12:27 AM
are you gonna add pigeon dropings on her clothes?
Slimspoonful
01-10-09, 04:21 PM
Hey Guys,
Been awhile and was even warned by aurick I better get my ass moving. Took awhile and a lot of learning as I have never used the retopologize tools before, but I finally got the majority of her clothing subtools setup. The only basemesh I grabbed from maya was the skirt all the others were produced in zbrush as will all the rest of her subtools still needing to be done other then the scarf. I wont go over detailed steps of my process unless you guys really want to see them as you seen it on 50 other models already. I'll be doing more sculpting today and will hopefully have a WIP image for you later tonight.
Cheers,
Matt
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Slimspoonful
01-10-09, 05:38 PM
Hey Guys,
Went ahead and fixed her pose using Transpose Master should be much more dynamic and balanced now. Have smooth out the mesh issues yet but trying to work very general for now. Comments are welcome.
Cheers,
Matt
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maxinkuk
01-10-09, 05:43 PM
It's a lot better. I think that her right arm still needs a more natural placement though.
Y/Haüss
01-10-09, 05:43 PM
Your Lady has allonges muscles!!! Like an Ioga Master!
Congratulations, very nice Hero!
Slimspoonful
01-11-09, 05:26 PM
Hey Guys,
Got the transpose master mess cleaned up, and started the final blocking. Think I may replace the right hand with a zsphere fist. I feel it might be better to deal with it as a solid surface rather then attempt to sculpt and pose the current mesh. Also added the first pass on her hair. Gonna do a cloth drapery pass next and do a layout pass on the shoes. And then onto a finesse pass on the face.
Cheers,
Matt
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jinchoung
01-11-09, 11:09 PM
sweet! you're getting very nice results on her clothing and her head/hair is looking good. i don't have a foot fetish (or an old lady fetish) but i love the shape of her feet.
can't wait to see another rev!
jin
SolidSnakexxx
01-12-09, 07:31 PM
The pose looks great and depicts what's in the concept real well. :)
swankymonkey
01-12-09, 07:46 PM
I dig the pose, and the support hosiery!
Slimspoonful
01-17-09, 05:08 PM
Hey Guys,
Seems the only time I have to work on is the weekends. Spent some of today really getting to know her face. Think its coming out pretty nice so far still have to do the ears, taking a little more blobbyness out, and the high frequency stuff. Want to have a complete polishing pass on her done by the end of the weekend....
Cheers
Matt
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luis2008
01-17-09, 05:15 PM
nice. yeah the forms are looking really good on her face. good job
SolidSnakexxx
01-17-09, 08:10 PM
Looking good so far. I think for your hero, you've established a good pose design and the head is coming right along. Look forward to your next update. :)
Slimspoonful
01-24-09, 06:22 PM
Hey guys,
Its the weekend again and that means time to update my action hero. I'm trying to finish all the main sculpting minus the pigeons this weekend. Spent some time trying to get this drapery looking right, not done yet, as its still a little lumpy but I'm happy with the layout of the wrinkles. I'll also add the tailoring details. C + C are always more then welcome.
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Cheers,
Matt
maxinkuk
01-24-09, 06:44 PM
She looks like she means business. Good pose now, and good layout of folds in the clothing. I would only add one or two to the back of her right arm. But apart from that she looks in top shape.
womball
01-24-09, 08:06 PM
Hahaha! She is great. Although from her story, she sounds like a villian.
Harmonic
01-24-09, 10:42 PM
That is so great! :lol: Good work on the cloth, looks solid so far. I love the way you did her face, lots of character.
SolidSnakexxx
01-24-09, 10:47 PM
The progress is coming along so well. I like her pose and it seems she really mean business. Excellent work I look forward to see more of this.
I really dig that char :D
great stuff, hang on!
greets
froyd
jtruthnick
01-26-09, 08:13 AM
Very cool character! i'll be watching this!
Slimspoonful
01-28-09, 12:34 AM
Hey All,
Time is getting shorter so its time to buck up and start to get this done. I finished the overall basic sculpt on her. She still needs a bunch of details(buttons, shoelaces, flower on hat). And I still need to do a final pass on everything and add the high frequency detail but I'm happy with how she is coming. I plan to work out the pigeons next that way I can put together a final product, then move back to finaling and eventually materials and textures. C + C are more then welcome.
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Cheers,
Matt
markrulz
01-28-09, 01:39 AM
Looks really good. Great character.
I'd say her hips are a bit... mannish. Otherwise she looks almost old-boyish to me.
I used to date her!!
Tremendous.
Concept and execution:tu:
You got my vote:tu: :tu: :tu: :tu:
Seavannah
01-28-09, 04:59 AM
:lol: Ha ha:lol: I just love her she reminds me of my great aunt Mary full of spunk and vinegar and yet the kindest woman you could meet. Love your models cloths and her face is so cool. Her outstretched leg looks a little too crooked but that is my one and only crit. She is just so cool and I could totally see her in some cool 3d movie as a crazy bird lady ready to get the bad guys. Keep up the great work on the ol'Gal she makes me smile every time I look at her.:D
Slimspoonful
01-28-09, 11:28 PM
Hey Guys,
Did the zspheres, blocking pass, and rough color pass on pigeons and added them hope you enjoy. Will move onto finishing all the sculpting next. The pigeons are roughly placed and will sit properly after the final sculpt. C+C more then welcome.
Seavannah - I completely agree with you that leg is twisted dont know how I missed it thanks a bunch:D
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Cheers,
Matt
wow really nice stuff :tu::tu::tu:..............waiting for more updates :Dand i love that kinda characters :):):)
SolidSnakexxx
01-29-09, 12:56 AM
Nice pigeon models. :tu: I think you can paint them differently so that they look a bit distinct. :)
Please note that the rules require that your entry be updated at least once per week. If no updates have been made on this entry within the next 48 hours I'm going to have to disqualify it.
Slimspoonful
02-07-09, 01:03 AM
Hey Guys,
Haven't been able to put much time into her lately as were in crunch at work but I have started to paint textures, work on some materials, and add some details. Still alot to go. Hope to put the finishing push in this weekend leaving only ends to tie up next week. The majority of the work is left in finishing her hair, separating out the eyes, the flower on the hat. and painting textures all around. Followed by what ever set I have time to do. Will make the absolute best of the little time I have left. C +C always welcome.
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Cheers,
Matt
goldo_O
02-07-09, 01:06 AM
Hi Matt! I love your pigeon model! The Zshpere model is so funny by itself :lol:
Good luck for the final week man!
Love the work, go go go.!!!!!!!
Put a white smear on her shoulder, ( counts as an update ;) )
Jason Belec
02-07-09, 08:38 AM
Pretty sweet character and idea. Really like the toon style to this one. ;)
Slimspoonful
02-10-09, 12:49 AM
Hey All,
Painted some of the textures, worked on the materials(though I'm definitely not satified), and put thing in general order. The skin matcap seems too bright for me at this point(if anyone has suggestions or a better skin shader then just plain ol' skin 04 I'll sing you "Wind Beneath My Wings") I still feel alot of tweaking coming on. I hope to also get the environment up and running tomorrow night. As always c + c more then welcome.
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Cheers,
Matt
Jordan.Bill.B
02-10-09, 01:43 AM
bird lady knows what up.
SolidSnakexxx
02-10-09, 01:58 AM
Oh...I missed a few updates of yours...Very cool poly paint job.. :) I like it....almost like a mix of realistic/toon style.
Slimspoonful
02-13-09, 11:32 PM
Still Image:
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Cheers,
Matt
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