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Seavannah
12-21-08, 10:05 PM
Chyan: The Chaos Chronicles
by: Brandy Cline
In another world, long ago, a young woman of a royal lineage, Chyan, lived and died. Her father was the pharaoh who unconditionally trusted his captain of the guard, Fradamaak. Fradamaak, a truly evil and corrupt man, with his dark magick controlled the ignorant pharaoh. In his evil quest to become pharaoh himself, talks Chyan’s father into her being betrothed to him.
One fateful night, Chyan, in order to flee her demise, disguises herself in plain robes and steals out of the palace walls. Only to discover for the first time, the slaves of her father. During her escape she comes across a very young and innocent boy, a slave. He helps her, without thought of who she might be, to hide from the guard. She felt the kindness and wonder of this boy, and for the first time in her life she felt for someone other than herself. Later she would come across the boy being beat to death by Fradamaak. Before Fradamaak could land the final blow to the kind boy-slave, she stepped in the way of his blade. She used her small dagger and slid it into Fradamaak’s side killing him along with her.
Because of her last act of kindness and sacrifice, in which made up for her ignorance in her life, an angel had come to take her to heaven, While making her assent she becomes a hybrid angel. In seeing her sacrifice, and against the commandments of the high lord, the angel had fallen in love with her. In his blindness of love he did not see the demon soldiers stealing upon them. Chyan was dragged down to hell.
While in hell, Fradamaak makes her eat the food of the dead and she becomes half demon as well. One night, she spied the Lord of hell, Lorad, and Fradamaak talking, in which she overhears the evil plot to dominate the Earth above and Heaven itself. She had to get out and warn her people and see if she could find her love struck angel to warn him as well. She escaped, only then realizing that Lord Lorad and Fradamaak had planned this from the beginning, only someone with the blood of an angel could tear a rift between hell and the surface of the earth.
Fradamaak, following closely on her heels, led a company of demons to the surface. They scattered to the four winds. Since it was she that let them out, and the angels not being able help her since she was a half demon blood, she sets out on a quest to put all the demons back into hell where they belonged. The demons she found could take possession of any slightly corrupt soul. After many years she finally came across Fradamaak, in her father’s temple, nonetheless. While in her father’s body, Fradamaak got the upper hand and trapped her in a small sarcophagus. He brought the whole roof of the temple down upon her, and with his dark magick he sealed the temple. Under tons of rubble she slept a dreamless sleep for near 2 thousand years.
A modern day subway company, while finishing up the end of a tunnel, broke through the wall of the temple allowing her escape. With no memory of who she was, or what for that matter, she sets out into the strange city to discover a whole world she knows nothing about, a world full of strange devices and technology she had never imagined. A world that was quickly going to hell in a hand basket.
Frightened and lost amongst the strange tall buildings, she comes across a little girl being kidnapped by an evil man. She sees something that no one else can, this man was a grotesque monster, a demon. Not knowing why; she felt she had to stop this demon. In her battle with the demon-man a, skeptical, mortal and strangely familiar, detective helps her. Will she be able to find and beat Fradamaak? After learning she is half demon and can not set foot in heaven, will she sacrifice herself to seal the rift and stop the world from going to hell? Stay tuned…….
Powers:
Hybrid angel and demon: hero unless some situation needs her to be a villain
Immortal-undead (can be killed though, but it isn‘t easy)
Fast healer
Can run pretty fast and jump fairly long distances
After she fights awhile, she gains the knowledge of some magic, including animal spirits and being able to turn into some for a limited time
Can fight with ancient fighting skills but learns some new stuff in the present day
At the end of the series she gets a pair of black wings and can fly.
Maybe has a buddy like a phoenix?
Weapon knowledge: Swords , crossbows, sickles, axes, handmade whips with sharp metal points at the ends that hang from her body and hair (so she can even do damage when she whips her hair around, and anything else that she can get her hands on.
Age: About 28 years of age give or take a few thousand years.
Place: She starts out in a forest/jungle like place and ends up in an idustrial modern day not too much unlike our own New York City.
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I will be making this as an online comic I hope one day. I think I have too she has been in my mind for too long...aching to get out.
SolidSnakexxx
12-22-08, 01:50 AM
O....I'd love this character takes ZBrush form any day :) She's like a lost hero in modern days. This can be a cool looking lady hero you have here.
I like the backstory! The part about finding herself in a large, modern, city, with no experience or understanding of where she is.
This will be a great character to watch develop. The hair plaits are awesome!
~OM
Seavannah
12-28-08, 06:16 PM
SolidSnakexxx - Thanx for that. I hope she forms as well as yours has in zbrush...at this point I hope I can just finish her lol :lol: . My fingers are crossed. And really great on your mantis man really coming along fast.
C-Mad - Thanx for that. :D I hope one day to make her into a online comic series and short online movies flicks. She has been in my mind for years but my lazy muse never came up with a story for her :mad: , no story no model, I had to know where she came from before I knew what she looked like. Well my muse finally woke up a few days after the contest started. I had fun making the hair.
and thank you pixologic for getting my muse up off her lazy but with this cool contest. :lol:
Seavannah
12-28-08, 08:02 PM
I know I will lose some points on this but I have issues with z spheres... and topology I am too impatient with it for retopping my model unless serious prob I do use topo for most clothing items so I will use it there. Most everything else will be zb. Model imported obj. from Makehuman freeware program. I had to bring it into 3dsmax and sew the head on and fix a couple of polys and remove some isolated verts. Makehuman is a really great program (it has some probs like not being able to save, just export and some pics for the morphing aren't there but you can still use the buttons for them. It reminds me of poser but easier for me to control and of course free is always great. You can make children to old people and some very interesting characters. I found out about it in one of the threads on zb central right before this contest.
chaosimportpic.jpg
Here is the body I imported to zbrush
chaosimportpicteeth.jpg
I ripped the teeth out using zb before I took it to max for refinements so that I could have them on a separate subtool and control them more. The eyes are mine from zb mesh. I learnt how to make them looking at nickz's really cool free model, so thanks for that. I learnt some of the polygroups from him and the birth tutorial.
startpolygroup.jpg
backup.jpg
startpolygroupface.jpg
These are my polygroups all done. I hope I did them right. I am hoping to have better control with masking while doing the transpose stuff.
chaosdetail001.jpg
chaosdetailback001.jpg
These are the detail I have started. I have only worked a little from the chest down to the thighs so far. I want her strong but also soft and beautiful. She will have more weight than most of the comic she-heroes that I have seen save a few like Joseph Michael Linsner's Cry for Dawn. (one of my favs).
Don't get me wrong I love comics like aeon flux and stuff but Chyan is not about :cool: stealth and stuff she is a kind of seek and destroy you kind of gal. Some may even think her soft and beautiful... but the only thing holding up her halo is her :evil: horns:evil: .
My updates on her should be coming faster now that I have done all the technical layouts she needs (for now anyway :eek: )...polygrouping takes me a while and I probably didn't do something right lol :mad: ....now I get to the fun stuff till I get to somewhere I messed up...thank god we have more than a month to do this :D .
I hope you all like her :) , or hate her :p depending on weather you are a hero or a villain lol....I know I am such a cornball :rolleyes: ...any way take care and happy zbrushing.
SolidSnakexxx
12-28-08, 09:44 PM
Looks like a major update there, Seavannah. Just minor crit on the breast, I think it seems pushed together to the center area too much?, like she's wearing tight fitting bra or something (Or is that how you are going to have her be wearing). Other than that, you are off to a solid base start. :cool:
Seavannah
12-29-08, 12:04 AM
yeah I am thinking a corset or something tight wrapped. I don't want them in the way when she is fighting. I did make them a bit big but I haven't done much to them except for blocking them out they will be better soon I hope...she is due in surgery soon lol. I have mainly paid attention to her hips and that lower part of her body and giving her a bit more weight. Thanks for the complement on the major update:D ...it seems it took me forever just to import her and polygroup her...I just started having fun last night with the detailing:D .
dustbin1_uk
12-29-08, 01:07 AM
I love the detail of your concept!!
A great story gives substance to any character!
The one observation I have is that women heroes and villians in almost any comic book, tend to have well rounded bosoms and the uncanny ability to have them ignore gravity! ;)
The only other bit is maybe thicken the upper arms up a bit.
But those are small preferences rather than real crits.
That aside keep going!! looking great so far!! And the detailed concept has sparked my interest.
Looking at it, it really reveals a woman shape, nice wide hips.. the face is looking nice already :D going good!
Moni-Poroni
12-29-08, 02:02 PM
Hi Seavannah,
Nice to meet other female artists here :)
I love the backstory of your character...
It´s really unique.
Up to now it´s an excellent start
I´m looking forward to the next updates ;)
Kind Regards
Seavannah
12-29-08, 05:47 PM
dustbin1_uk - thanxs for that you saying that means a lot for I just love your stuff. I have yet to detail and shape the breast I just wanted to block them out a bit till I do the clothing that will be holding them in and causing them to be shaped a certain way thinking corset or a metal something or other, I have not got that far I can only see the bottom half and the back of her in my head lol. My muse is so evil sometimes, should of made a villain muse super or something lol. Hey that's an idea...hmmm maybe another time....lol.
The arms I have ignored so far lol...they are a bit hard for me...I want them strong but soft and not too fat that balance will give me some trouble I think.
Wiebe - Thanks for the compliments. Yeah still trying to figure out the face. I can see her eyes lol and that's it.
She is certainly taking her time showing me bits and pieces....great she's already got an attitude lol....
Moni-Poroni - yea! another female I was starting to feel lonely...lol. Thanx for the compliments...I really want to make an online comic series of her so it's nice to hear the story is good. Love your concept and your art on your thread really awesome.
thanx to all for your crits and comments...I need them.....
You are off to a really great start with the form on your character!
My only critique would be regarding the topology - you seem to have quite a few poles and triangles that could make it more difficult to sculpt on top of. They also tend to create pinched-dot looking artifacts, if you smooth over them at higher subdivisions.
It's not a big problem really, (since you could change the topology any time you like) just the only thing I could pick at. Looking forward for more updates!
Seavannah
01-05-09, 06:58 AM
Fess -:D Thanks for the comment. Yeah I need to retop her. Don't know how to do it quickly...When doing retop it feels too much like my max days, just pushing the little hard to see dots around and not accomplishing anything..lol
I Like making cloths with it though.
There was a movie I found not to long ago about how to retop quickly but the movie wouldn't play for me :cry: and now I can't find it :confused: . If anyone knows what I am talking about please let me know where it is or if you have a tip on how to do it quickly would really appreciate it.:D
Seavannah
01-05-09, 07:11 AM
Anyway here's my updates not much yet but I was getting tired of the naked look...lol. I still have some major work on her body and the texture that is sorta on her is not going to stay it was just a try at reference texturing...That was so much fun I want to do it again. I have to, when I detailed some more on her the texture went all wonko :eek: .
dressbra001front.jpgdressbra00134ths.jpg
dressbra001back.jpg
I will probably change the color of the dress and the bra may be metal not sure yet just letting it go for now. The dress will be fashioned regardless with metal clasps and it will be draped and flowing...I hope..lol...Glad there is more time to finish in this contest :D , I am just not as fast as most of you :o .
Seavannah
01-13-09, 12:08 AM
Here’s my cloths update decided to change it looked a little to like a formal gown to me. These still are not the textures and maybe not the colors even but maybe gold and brown :idea: ....I am more of a silver/white gold girl :D .
Front001.jpg 314ths001.jpg
back001.jpg
frontnodress001.jpg backnodress001.jpg
Crits and comments only if you have the time, I'm sure you all are :eek: madly :eek: zbrushing away like me :D . Although I am still looking for that movie on fast topo tips was searching for something else when I ran across it and forgot to save the thread. :rolleyes: Ohh well, you know how it goes you look for something can't find it then when you search for something else you find it. I just hate it when I find things I was looking for and I don't need anymore lol.
:cool: :tu: Good Luck everyone and happy zbrushing. Great job the lot of you! I have seen some really great sculpts in this contest and I wish you all the best. :cool: :tu:
P.S. size of breast not actual will be down sizing after I retopo her. Not all the clothing will be as thick either. ;)
SolidSnakexxx
01-13-09, 12:10 AM
Big update, Seavannah. It seems like you have enhanced...the breast as well. I kind of like the smaller version as she'd look more agile with that set. :o Other than that great update :)
snoopalu
01-13-09, 12:14 AM
Hi Hi,
your model is comming out nicely. Can we have a side shot of her body a ortho one? Her boobs bother me alittle. some reason it looks its causing her to bend forward because they are so heavy/big. Maybe its just me.
-Tony :p
Seavannah
01-13-09, 12:24 AM
SolidSnakexxx
snoopalu
Thanks
Yeah I know she is scheduled for a breast reduction tomarrow. I am too tired to do it tonight and wanted to get the pics in before Aurik came a calling...lol. I don't like them either I want them more smaller size... a little bigger than before though. I had to do that cause of the underline mesh problems, namely the base model, I think I am going to retop her very soon cause there is some funky skin problems going on with her underneath those cloths...her breast were the worst and her unmentionables lol.
Anyway thanks again and will update the pics hopefully sometime tomarrow.
Edit: Why I put more my size I can't even figure out what I was meaning, I think I was trying to say a more smaller size than what she has. I must of been more tired than I thought last night...oh well damge done and no she won't be more of my size. I did get a laugh out of that though sorry about the miss typing, man you guys catch everthing and here lol :D
I have to say, that thong is very practical. I like the way you dropped the back on the larger garment as well. Good Revisions.
SolidSnakexxx
01-13-09, 01:56 AM
"...I don't like them either I want them more my size...."......Wow..that's quite a bit of personal information. :o Anyhow, you have a good rest, tomorrow you will be operating the breast reduction surgery :D
Gohanf22
01-13-09, 02:14 AM
I don't like them either I want them more my size...I'm not going to reply anything to that statement. :o . I'll keep my 2 cents to myself. :lol: . Anyway, doing one heck of a job. Keep it up. :D :tu:
sazar26
01-13-09, 03:05 AM
"I don't like them either I want them more my size".... :eek:
well i looking forward to you next update :rolleyes:
she she look good so far maybe my super heroin can show yours around town some time and kick some evil villain butt!
Moni-Poroni
01-13-09, 05:02 AM
Hey Seavannah ;)
I´m so happy you´re back :) !!!
Great update....:)
The only thing I´d change is....yes...the size of her breasts:)
Because she´s a hero and has to be thoroughly fit..so I think smaller ones suits her much better :)
But I think by the time you´re going to read this post she´s already managed the breast reduction :D
I´ll bring along some flowers and I´ll come around later for a visit...
Not for sightseeing....
let´s call it Z-izeseeing ;)
Kind regards
Seavannah
01-13-09, 04:56 PM
AVTPro - Thanks for that I really wanted to know what you all thought of the clothing style. I appreciate ya not saying anything on the breast size as well. I hope to finish some more on her clothing she still has more stuff to go on her and I am going to run out of ram. :D
SolidSnakexxx - yeah too personal :o ...oh well I didn't proof read my stuff last night like I usually do ohh well :o . She still is in surgery...had some complications this morning but she is stable lol :D .
Gohanf22 -
I’ll keep my 2 cents to myself. Thanks for that and thanks for the kind words :D .
sazar26 - Thanks for the kind words and yeah hanging out kicking some :cool: bad guys but :cool: sounds good right now but you'll have to wait she's still in surgery lol. :D
Moni-Poroni - :lol:
But I think by the time you’re going to read this post she’s already managed the breast reduction
I’ll bring along some flowers and I’ll come around later for a visit...
Not for sightseeing....
let’s call it Z-izeseeing :lol: you got me laughing so hard at that...thanks for the much needed laugh and for the kind words. :lol: :cool: :lol:
I will update soon as she is out of the operating room lol.
Seavannah
01-13-09, 04:59 PM
Maybe silly question.... Does anyone know if we can use HD geometry and will it work with transpose and turntable? My ram will soon be suffering if I can't use it.:cry:
Gohanf22
01-13-09, 05:01 PM
i was using that before but now i cant remember how I did it anymore. lol. sorry hun. :(
Seavannah
01-13-09, 05:22 PM
Gohanf22 - thanks for trying.
I do know how to use the HD Geometry but am not sure if we can use it in this contest or with the turntable or if there might be some problem with the transpose and using HD? I will probably use it after the transpose stuff, but can we use it before we transpose.
Gohanf22-If you want to know how to get it going that I can help you with just let me know. You can use it for other projects unless we can use it for this contest.:D
Gohanf22
01-13-09, 05:24 PM
oh thats ok hun. i havent even gotten my tablet yet to even worry about sculpting atm. im finally getting one for how long i was working on Nightfall with a damn mouse. :mad: . hopefully it will be better but dont worry about it. maybe i may ask you some other time when i start again on my Starsiege WIPs for the trilogy im producing.
ps. - actually i may still ask you for nightfall but not until i get a good start on her again. thank you for the offer.
Moni-Poroni
01-13-09, 05:33 PM
Hey Seavannah...;)
You may use any and all ZBrush features, including SubTools, HD Sculpting, PolyPaint and TransPose. (The use of plugins such as TransPose Master and SubTool Master is encouraged)
->
http://www.pixologic.com/contest/hero/rules/
But I don´t know the other thing concrning the turntable...:confused:
Kind Regards ;)
Seavannah
01-13-09, 06:01 PM
Thanks Mooni ha ha I must of skipped that part in the rules when they updated them. :o thanks for taking the time. cool no worries on the ram yea! ok now I am getting some where I was afraid I wouldn't be able to use it for some reason and not have enough ram to detail all of her stuff. I still have a lot to do not to mention her hair that should be fun..lol:eek: Thanks again.
Seavannah
01-14-09, 07:31 PM
still in surgery... had to retop her big time. wish me luck I have never fully retoped a model before just made clothing and stuff. will keep you all updated. take care and good luck to you all. :D
snoopalu
01-14-09, 10:38 PM
whats HD Geomerty tool? Omg I'm trying to retop in Brush and its hard.
Moni-Poroni
01-15-09, 05:26 AM
snoopalu
If you´ll search then you´ll find ;)
everything about HD-Geometry
->
http://www.zbrush.info/docs/index.php/HD_Geometry
Seavannah
Let me know if she´s back home :) :) :)
Seavannah
01-16-09, 05:22 PM
Mooni - Thanks for the link for snoopalu :D and caring about my poor mutilated model lol. Still have to do the head and hands, and then she will be back and hopefully better than ever. I did 8 hrs yesterday and then had to delete a lot of the retop lines and realized I didn't really get much done :cry: . well got it going late last night and my hands are now steadier for this major overhaul. I was retopping in my mind when I finally set down to sleep :eek: . I am like you need only a few hours of sleep i am a major insomniac lol :eek: .
snoopalu - yes retopping is very difficult but needed.
:D Maybe zb will allow us to say that after retopping it becomes our base model and not lose any "bonus" points for the small use of an outside program (in my case very small cause I will be changing quite a bit of structure. I love zb but not to fond of Zsphere's sorry being honest, and you still have to retop the zspheres anyway, for human like models :rolleyes: . Take care all and good luck.
Gohanf22
01-20-09, 03:10 AM
seavannah where are you? we want to see more of your chyan. :( hey your doing a good job. dont be hard on yourself for not liking zspheres. i dont like them much either but it doesn't hurt to try it out. ;) . your doing great on you model hun. keep up the good work. :D :tu:
Seavannah
01-20-09, 07:46 AM
Gohanf22 - thanks for the compliment :D . I envy those that can use the zpheres as well as you and others have, I just can't stand them except for the rigging ability for topo and posing. I wasted lots of time on them on the scared silly contest.
Hello all sorry bout that I got the flu and surgery took a whole lot longer than anticipated. Here's a few pics I hope to have more later today or tomorrow.
topo001.jpg
I know I didn't do everything right here but ohhh well it's my first time retopoing. Now it is an easier fix should I run into some problems later. Everything on that model was messed up and so many triangles not to mention it wasn't symmetrical in the least and had to do it from scratch.
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This is me laying down the zproject, this is fun but not, at the same time. The bright pink is what I still have to do.
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Not only did she have a major breast reduction (more to come soon cause she'll be wearing tight corset and still have to shape them after the projection) but she also lost over 1 million pounds I mean polys lol. :D
:eek: See you guys soon. :eek:
Happy Zbrushing.
SolidSnakexxx
01-20-09, 08:05 AM
Hey..there...the update's looking great....can't believe it's your first time retopologising... It's looking nice... and the smaller breast does fit a whole lot better :tu:
Gohanf22
01-20-09, 08:38 AM
oh wow. your doing a good job at retopologizing hun. very good. her breasts do look better as well. nice work. :D
Moni-Poroni
01-20-09, 11:34 AM
There she is :) :tu: :tu: :tu: and there you are :)
Looking good with her new Z-ize :lol: ( I should be ashamed to use the same joke agin AND laugh about it :o BUT I´m not :D )
Seriously-really great work Seavannah
your first time retopo ? :eek: :eek:
really cool! look @ mine :o and that´s been the second time.
but she also lost over 1 million pounds I mean polys lol
:lol: :lol: :lol: hahhhahahaaaa LOL LOL LOL :lol: :lol: :lol:
BEST WISHES
Moni-Poroni
01-27-09, 03:16 PM
Seavannaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.......where are you?????????
:( :( :(
Seavannah
01-28-09, 12:59 AM
SolidSnakexxx - thanks it wasn't easy and of course after all that making the topology two dots at a time, I finally found the tut on retoping faster lol ohh well I had it the whole time just not the movie about it lol.
Gohanf22 - thanks for the kind comments. I am glad you stayed and continued your work and learning. This is the best place to do that.
Moni-Poroni -:D herrrreee I ammmmmm:D , sorry bout that my fiancée’s bday was this weekend and we had some guests in between all that I was :mad: madly:mad: zbrushing.
Looking good with her new Z-ize :lol: ( I should be ashamed to use the same joke agin AND laugh about it :o BUT I´m not :D )
you can use that joke over and over, I still find it funny too :lol: . I thought your retoping was really good too:D . I am very impressed as you know with your villainess as well. Best wishes 2 u too and take care:cool: .
I have been madly zbrushing all this time excepting guest time and bday time. I have had some major difficulty with the zproject brush especially after getting it all zprojected and cleaned up, she ended up with some spiky polys in her eyes, mouth and hands. I then found some more of those great tuts that, I none the less already had but never tried. Found the projection in the rigging and topology pallet and used that. After some :lol: major funny blow up pics:lol: I finally achieved something close to the original while keeping my new topology. If I had known and read the tut I wouldn't have wasted so much time and frustration on the zproject brush. I now realize that is for deforming and small details and the projection pallet after doing your retoplogy is best to getting your form and detailing back from original model. I learnt something. I may post some of the funny blow ups for some :lol: SAGs :lol: (s**ts and giggles).
Here's my updates it isn't much yet excepting she was roughly (with cloths on and all about 3.5 million polys and now weighs in at about 1.3 million polys :eek:.
frontretopclean001.jpg
backretopclean003.jpg
frontretopclothclean001.jpg
sideretopclothclean002.jpgbackretopclothclean003.j pg
Not sure on the clothing color yet just playing around right now. I need her textured and to see her skin color before I mess with her cloth colors. Also fixed her leotard/g-string thing to fit her new z-ize (hope ya don't mind mooni but I really like the cute zbrushing slang you came up with I had to use it as well lol :lol: ).
:lol: One thing I learnt on Sunday was Laptops and stuffed Tummies don't work well... lol. I must of dropped my laptop on the floor 5 times lol :o . Thank god it still works lol.:lol:
:cool::tu: Happy zbrushing all:cool: :tu:
Seavannah
01-28-09, 01:16 AM
Hopefully since all of the technical pre stuff is done I can have some fun. Updates should becoming a lot faster too.
I still have:
Her belt, weapons (small handheld sickles), her head gear, hair, boot soles, knee and shin protection, gloves, protection for her arms, braided whips, base and not to mention detailing and texturing all this.....tick tock (:mad: bangs head against clock to try to stop the time:mad::rolleyes: :mad: )...:lol: J/K:lol: ....well this should be a bit more fun and hopefully easier.
Wish me luck I still got a lot to do. I wish you all the best of luck, there are some really great super heroes and villains out there.
One thing I would like to say is thank you to all whom have given me comments, crits and help or even just said hi... Win or not (I won't say lose cause I have gained so much already) I had fun:D and learnt so much, even somethings I didn't even know about myself;) .
henrysouth
01-28-09, 01:47 AM
hey Seavannah, great start wtih the model there. you may want to have a look at the proportions you have going there, at the moment they seem dwarfish, if you look at dwarfed proportions in humans (unlike midgets) there body stays quite small were as their heads continue to grow at a normal rate, stunting the size creates muscle groups to form around the neck and girdle. take a look at burne hogarth, i hate his style but his porportions are amazingly dramatic. and also looking at her profile u might think about curving it slightly, although it may not be instantly recogniseable as a major change from the front, it will make your reference fit to its contors.
SolidSnakexxx
01-28-09, 02:19 AM
Hey there, Seavannah, I was looking forward to your update..and i must say..great work on topology and it seems you are getting some coloring done as well :) Now I'm eager to see what pose you will direct here.
Seavannah
01-28-09, 03:07 AM
henrysouth - :D thanks for the comments and crits. I just noticed that I shrunk her waist length too much some where in between topo and projection.. oops she shrunk too much hot water I guess. Thanks for the heads up I knew something was amiss but my :eek: tired eyes:eek: couldn't see it. I probably won't make her too tall though I want her shorter than average comic hero but not stunted. lol.
SolidSnakexxx - thanks for the kind words and encouragement:D . I haven't even started detailing her yet or texturing. As for color still trying to find some mixtures I like. I kinda like the red but not sure of the metallic shiny stuff. Her pose is going to be her slaying a demon with her sickles in motion. My base will probably (if I have time) Chyan slaying Fradamaak with thick solid smoke like stuff, maybe even fire and skulls. Only other idea is her about jump from a building roof top or in the start of a jump with sickles out and or her holding one of her braided whips.
Gohanf22
01-28-09, 03:58 AM
beautiful work seavannah. very good work indeed. we were getting worried there for a second. glad to see your still alive.:D
Seavannah
01-28-09, 04:43 AM
Gohanf22 - thanks for the kind comment. I don't know at this point if I am alive have been awake to get this update out there for over two days lol. I feel like the undead lol. Will be going to sleep soon take care and happy zbrushing.
Seavannah
01-28-09, 04:53 AM
Good night I am going to get some shut eye...Well it's almost 5:30am here...so good day all I will be back very soon with more updates. I am finally at a place that I know about already save a few things but if I don't get to those ohh well not the end of the world I will skip them unless I have time to learn and do them. Happy Zbrushing all and all a good night/day.:D
Captain Sensible
01-28-09, 05:16 AM
Nice work and good job on the retopo! Looking forward to the pose :tu:
Alliecat 08
01-28-09, 08:31 AM
Good work. Can't wait to see the pose.
Moni-Poroni
01-28-09, 08:43 AM
Seavaaaaannaaaaah :) :) :) :) :)
I´m soooo glad you´re back
Great update :tu: :tu: :tu:
Thank you for the tip in my thread ;)
I´ll try it :)
Z you zoooooon please don´t let me wait toooo long :)
Seavannah
01-28-09, 09:27 PM
Captain Sensible - Thanx for the encourgement Captain.:D
Alliecat 08 - Thanx for the kind words. Yeah I can't wait to make the pose....it's coming soon but I have to get a few more things on her first.:D
Moni-Poroni - I won't take so long for updating her now and I'm :o sorry:o for not being around for a whiles. I hope that the tuts help ya:) , they saved and would of saved me a lot of time and heartache had I read them before going off and doing it my way:rolleyes: .... as per usual.... the :mad: hard:mad: way lol:lol: ... Great update on your page too. Take care and good luck.
Finners
01-29-09, 04:07 PM
Hey Seavannah (http://member.php/?u=79493), sexy outfit! looking forward to seeing the accessories! Think the profile of the face needs to be exaggerated a bit, looks a wee bit flat just now, maybe push the brow out further and pull the chin and bottom lip in bit?
Really like her facial features and the outfit is looking really nice! :cool: Great work and look forward to your next update! :tu:
snoopalu
01-30-09, 03:41 AM
ooOOohh.... Cool dress =) Its looking good ^^
petekasim
01-31-09, 05:23 PM
Well done on some great work here seavannah, and thanks for the kind comment on my thread.
I love how you have handled the clothing, and the anatomy is nicely done indeed! Keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing the pose :tu:
Seavannah
02-02-09, 03:56 PM
Finners - Thanx for the kind comments and the crit. I haven't done much to the face yet, gonna pose her first. Did mess with it a bit though. Thanx again.:D
spimmy - Thanx for the compliment on the clothing I had no idea what I was doing till it was all done lol.:D
snoopalu - Thanx for the kind words. I am glad everyone like the clothing still a lot to do and not much time.:D
petekasim - Thanx for that encouragement. I wasn't sure on the anatomy especially since I made her stumpy to save a few polys. I hope it don't effect the posing too much, lol. The pose I will be doing this week sometime I have a few things more to put on her before I pose her though. Wish me luck I am gonna need it lol. Never been too good at the posing.:D
Seavannah
02-02-09, 04:16 PM
Hey there everyone how ya all doing? I hope well.
Here's my update. Sorry took me so long I have been working my but off and freaking out at the same time.... tick tock.... Time is flying.
Well here she is, got a few more items to finish then on to posing her. Crits and comments are welcome, though many things will not be done until after the posing. Her feet seem too big to me I will probably z-ize them down a bit. Thanx all, take care and happy zbrushing.
FrontChy001.jpgSideChy001.jpg BackChy001.jpg
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D GloveBotChy001.jpg:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
gregoconn
02-02-09, 04:23 PM
Really nice Seavannah, I'm looking forward to seeing this one in a pose.
Seavannah
02-02-09, 06:22 PM
gregoconn - Thanx for the compliment. Yeah at this point I am hoping too, lol.
SolidSnakexxx
02-02-09, 06:24 PM
Really good choice of color for her outfit...The red/black work out real well :tu: :tu:
Seavannah
02-02-09, 06:52 PM
SolidSnakexxx - Thanx for the kind words I really needed to hear them. Wasn't too sure on my color choice. Now I will keep them. Thanx again.:D
Wow the clothes are really looking nice, the colours and the details are looking great! Great stuff!:tu: :cool:
Moni-Poroni
02-03-09, 11:12 AM
Hey ho Seavannah ;)
Really great update there!!! :) :) :)
I love the colours.
Not too red and not too orange :)
I agree with you..regarding the size of her feet
I think she´ll need another surgery :lol:
And I´ll visit her again ;)
But this time I won´t bring some flowers along ...
Nooo.... :)
I´m very hungry after visiting spimmys "La femme chocolat" thread ...:)
So I´ll bring a chocolate cake along :)
Can´t wait to see Chyan with hair and in action :) :tu:
Best wishes. ;)
Z-u
Seavannah
02-10-09, 12:29 AM
spimmy - Thanx Spimmy for the kind compliments. I, Like mooni love your "La femme chocolat" Model keep up the yummy work.
Moni-Poroni - Hey there sorry took so long to post. Thanks for the compliments and the kind words. My fiancee came up with the red idea and he was right. My muse only talks to him not me lol, so I listen to him. She didn't have to have surgery this time lol she just ordered the wrong size of boots lol. Yumm chocolate sounds so yummy right now. Take care and really great job on your model as well, you know I am so impressed with your work. :D
wethand
02-10-09, 12:59 AM
oh damn, another very nice hero i managed to miss until now...
i really like your color sheme! and the sculpt looks nice so far, too.
keep it going! :tu: :tu: :tu:
Seavannah
02-10-09, 01:05 AM
Here's my update. I probably won't be posting any more pics untill Friday. I will probably be testing and making sure videos work for me in a day or so in middle of posing her. She just don't want to bend right. Anyway here's some updates on her weapons, eyes (the texture is my eyes and I think I want them another color on her, not sure though), a bit on the face (though I am not done with it yet), clothing and boot fix (wich I still have more to do).
eyesplacementfront.jpg ChySickelsSide.jpg ChySickelsBack.jpg ChySickelsCloseupSide.jpg ChysGloves002.jpg Chysboots001.jpg ChySickel.jpg eyefacefront.jpg
mineeyes.jpg
Ohh (not that I don't love angelina Jolie and her lips but) as far as my model goes I am gonna go for the Gina Torres lips and maybe even her skin color haven't decided yet.
ginatorres101.jpg
Okie dokie got some major work still to do. Wish you all the best of luck and please wish me some as well I am gonna need it if I am gonna finish.
SolidSnakexxx
02-10-09, 01:14 AM
Seavannahm, the update's looking good. She certainly is ready for some action pose..BTW, the eye texture's looking marvelous too. :)
Seavannah
02-10-09, 02:08 AM
SolidSnakexxx - Thanx. I wish I had more done. Only a few days left. Do you think I should leave them or go with a different color? I just visted you thread and wow ohhh wow he just jumps off the page. I just love the fact that I got to see him made from day one. A fan always. Also thanx for all the compliments and the crits you have helped me so much, as you have most everyone else in this contest. I don't know how you do it.... Keep up the great work and keep being your wonderful self. Happy zbrushing.:D
Great eye textures dude, they look very good :tu: :tu: , and am liking the details for the clothing, they suit the character really well!! :cool: :tu: . Thanks for the compliments about the chocolate lady :) . Look forward to seeing the character in a cool pose ;).
Moni-Poroni
02-10-09, 03:32 PM
Seavanaaaaaaah..... :) :) :)
I´m soooo glad you´re back! :)
Wonderful update. :tu: :tu: :tu:
I love the weapons and:
you have absolutely beautiful eyes.. ;)
Really!! I have to say that! :)
BEST WISHES :)
Seavannah
02-13-09, 01:43 PM
Here's my first pose ever using transpose master. She's in the the process of jumping off a building top. Am trying to upload one movie into youtube. I am gonna work on this till the last second if I can or fall asleep not sure yet lol. Good luck to all and be gentle I know there are some probs with her pose but there probably won't be any time to fix it. Crits and comments are fine though.
ChaosPoseFront.jpg ChaosPoseSide.jpg ChaosPoseBack.jpg ChaosPose34sturn.jpg
:D :eek: :rolleyes: :o :lol: :D
Seavannah
02-13-09, 02:03 PM
I hope this is my trans pose movie it's a little over 8 mins long. I never posed a model fully before using transpose master so please bear with me lol. What a great plugin I had fun and learnt so much here. One thing though my glove belts didn't work took me a couple days to figure that out so they got tossed with the garbage ohh well I kinda like them gone anyway. Good luck all.
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well here it is but it's so small and blurry. How do others get it so clean looking in thier posts. My res was good and it is nice on my comp. Is this youtube or me that has made it that way?
Moni-Poroni
02-13-09, 06:27 PM
Seavannaaaah :) helloooo :)
Great video :tu: and great upate. Please hurry !!!
And don´t get asleep!!!
It´s almost 4:00AM here :) I´ll go to bed now..I can..my thread is closed now.
Hm.. I don´t know how they get clean videos.. my pics and my videos are blurry too.:(
Yah... but now it´s too late.:)
Hope I can figure that out for my next project. ( I think I´ll start next week... yepp-I became a Zbrush freak..LOL^^)
I hope we stay in contact.
I´ll be here @ ZBC..umm.... I think everyday ;) ...
Ok.. I hope I´ll see your entry - "thread closed" when I wake up.
I wish you all the best Seavannah! You´re such a kind person. And thanks for all the great help.
Z-u ;)
SolidSnakexxx
02-13-09, 06:32 PM
Hello..there Seavannah..the vid's looking great there....Please hurry and post before deadline. :) Best of luck to you.
Moni-Poroni
02-28-09, 11:11 AM
Seavannaaaah :)
I´ve been waiting the whole time! Now I can write you again! :)
I feel sorry that you didn´t finish Chyan in time. But I´m glad your thread is still there.
Hope you show us the final version! :)
Kind regards,
Mooooni ;)
Moni-Poroni
03-03-09, 04:48 AM
Seavannah... what happened to you?
I can´t contact you in any other way.:(
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