Please critique these updates

[avmics]

Please critique these updates

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200407/user_image-1090818730pqo.jpg

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200407/user_image-1090818756qcs.jpg

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200407/user_image-1090818782uxc.jpg


http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200407/user_image-1090818814lkv.jpg


http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200407/user_image-1090818843sfo.jpg

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200407/user_image-1090818869hip.jpg

[AdamT]

Looking better all the time--great job!

On the male figure, the hamstrings could use some more emphasis. The female's knees could use some more definition too, but you're probably getting to that. I think both characters need a more exaggerated s-curve in the spine.

[avmics]

excellent comments

[avmics]

thanks for the critiques here are updates

femalebody.jpg femaleface.jpg manbody.jpg manface.jpg

[avmics]

Here are some updates please critique

1manbody.jpg
1manface.jpg

[aminuts]

Hi,

They are getting better! But this last batch...it's hard to tell what you improved or not because of the material you chose for these renders.

Only thing I can really comment on is the front view of his nose....it's too wide from top to bottom but that may be the lighting?

On the pics you posted a while back....the female's ears are a bit funky...and too small for the head.

keep up the good work!

[avmics]

thanks for the comments
here is the model with a different material
2manbody.jpg 2manface.jpg

[doron]

very nice modeling

i think the proportions of the male body are a little wrong
he should have a thiner waste. and the head could be a little bit bigger (or the body smaller:lol: )

Doron

[Ron Harris]

Your model looks fine to me. I wish my waist was as thin as the models waist is. LOL... Very nice modeling...What are your plans for this fine specimen? Animation?
:tu: :tu: :tu: :tu: :tu:
ron

[avmics]

thanks for the comments yes I will be animating the model.

[Logick]

to me the female head ..the eyes seem to have an underbite, other than that looks good, could use some smoothing, the male full figure's feet seem a little thin and his arms seem a little long, other than that looks really good:lol:

[avmics]

Thank you for the comments here are the updates to the female model

2femaleface.jpg 2femalebody.jpg

[avmics]

please critique this update

3manface.jpg

[Shmooel]

As far as the male model goes the waste is fine, however the feet and hands are a little small, your anatomy on the torso is good but like everyones models needs a little more refining. Also the Ankles and wrists need to be a little bigger than that, sometimes I find that I have to exaggerate a little bit the feet and hands areas to make the model more believable. On the female her neck looks a little small and the head a little elongated, wow look at me as though I think I know what I am saying. I love the models keep it up.:tu:

[avmics]

update of the male model

6manbody.jpg

[Shmooel]

looking great, are you using any reference for these?:D

[drmapl]

I think you could improve the heads by improving the ears. The ears seem to me to far to the back of the head. If you bring them more to the front you will also get a better, more prominent jar. They are about right in size for the male but the female ears should be a bit larger. The top of the ears should be about as high as the eye brows and the ear lope should start at a line horizontal with the tip of the nose. The ears are to tight to the skull in both models take them a bit off as one can usually see quite a bit of them in the front view.

I really like your models. Keep up the excellent work :tu:

Cheers