Please critique this crocodile creature model

[avmics]

Please critique this crocodile creature model

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/uploaded_from_zbc/200407/user_image-1089776570ffu.jpg

[Ron Harris]

cute critter...I would rework the forearms and hands a bit more...too rounded and distracting from the rest of the design. Possibly lengthen the tail a bit.

I do like the whimsical nature though of the overall design. I don't know he is to be fierce or more cartoonish? If you are going for a more serious scary creation, I would take a bit of the dip out of the nose bridge snout area if you are going for a more serious character. Otherwise he is fine to me. Look forward to seeing him textured.
ron

[Dickie]

It's a Crocostimpy!
http://ourworld.cs.com/WeezelX/rs/crocopet.jpg

If he's just a character you made to be a fun one, you succeded very well. He's a cutie...
BUT I also agree with Ron, in that if he's supposed to be scary or serious, don't make him smile as that isn't really scary. Either way, I like him as a character...

Dickie

[Aztec...soljA]

hahaha really cute thing

[Abyssis]

nice Gator :D :tu:

[avmics]

thanks for the great comments yes the character is supposed to be funny

the stimpy picture is really funny

[Bloody(Magic]

Ultra bad :td:

[ribok7]

Bloody(magic try not to be a bone head :rolleyes:

[Eddie The Pirate]

Your critter has a great face. I love it. I would think about the characters underlying skeleton. Is the guy really strong? Can his rib cage and shoulders support his strength.

And to BloodyMagic: GET THERAPY!!!!!!

[Chanchito gordo]

God damn Bloodymagic you don´t beat around the bush do you?! Your honesty, cruel though it may be cracks me up every time :D

[angstrom]

Oh dear.

Anyway, I like the strutty attitude of the beast (that's your figure I mean, avmics. ;) ) Reminds me of a character in Corben's Sinbad graphic novel. I hesitate to crit, but I do think the tail could be joined to the body a little more smoothly.

Alan.

[Frenchy Pilou]

Crocodyle Dundee :D
Pilou

[avmics]

thanks for the excellent comments i will work on your recommendations

[BizzaroCloud]

That alligator is ripped (meaning like strong in the stomache area)... for me to give criticism, what direction were u going for? like a joke cartoony character or a realistic cartoony character?

[Betomelo]

Who am I to criticize your work, am a beginner that still this only lost with interface of Zbrush, imagine when it begins to model. Your work this great, reminds me a lot to Dragon Ball characters. My children like these characters. Go in front and a lot of success!!!!:) :tu: