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Mahlikus The Black
11-26-02, 12:22 AM
This is my first long term project in Z and my first full figure. When I came home from work today, I had an idea for a great image...and only 6 hours later, I finally finished the major modeling. I would like some 121 on her if you all don't mind.

Here is a thumbnail of the character.

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1038298802xww.jpg

Some things that changed...the head...I just couldn't bring myself to do it..what do you all think?

Here is the model..in a quick position..not the final.

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1038298894tqb.jpg

Thing to fix so far: Torso and leg are not long enough.

Thank you for the feedback.

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Mik
11-26-02, 01:44 AM
Looks like a good start and a nice conceptual sketch.
I can't really offer any 121, as you say it's just a quick positional test.
The bikini top looks a bit too thick in comparison to the light, flouncy looking skirt.
Good to see how it is progressing.
Mik

Mahlikus The Black
11-27-02, 09:35 AM
Thanks for the comments Mik. I an looking forward to this image but unfortunately, with the holiday this weekend and pressing work from existing clients, it is going to take longer then I had wanted. :(

But I will try to squeeze some Z time in Friday or Saturday.

PusGhetty
11-27-02, 01:41 PM
MTB,
I think it is coming along nicely, Some 121, hmmn... A critique, A few minor adjustments could be made... First of all the disinterested (crossed arms are body language for disinterest.) pose and form are real nice. The area around the knees looks a bit too skinny and could use some meat on the sides. The shoulders seem a little too broad(masculine) perhaps making them smaller would add more femininity. Also, the arms seem to be intersecting eachother. The clothes could use something... perhaps more details... I don't know. I'm not real sure what you are doing with the hands, head and feet but I'm sure you already know that and will work more on them. Overall I think this really could be something quite fantastic with the right attention. Great job so far! I dig your concept sketch too!
Best Regards,
Michael

s borg
11-27-02, 02:06 PM
Great design, can't wait to see how this one looks when finished.
I love the alien head too,nice touch,and you know i just can't resist aliens :)

Mahlikus The Black
11-28-02, 06:06 PM
Alright! thanks for the comments!
Here is another position test with model changes....
http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1038535570xcf.jpg

filament9
11-28-02, 10:01 PM
This is promising. I have to tell you that I'm looking forward to updates. Soon ;)

drjjwow
11-28-02, 10:34 PM
she going to look awesome when you finish her... i look forward to her render..

picsas
11-29-02, 03:15 PM
oh this is promising, please finish soon. excellent work!!

Mahlikus The Black
11-30-02, 03:30 AM
Another Quick update. Still nowhere near finished but I am taking my time.

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1038655767bmw.jpg

ztevie-rae
11-30-02, 03:45 AM
Your Female alien'z ,lookin very cool and sasssssssssy M'man !!. :cool: :tu:

deks
11-30-02, 05:32 AM
Heeeeey! That's actually awesome! I'm sicking tired at monsters and sort a stuff this days. Great to se an old great female alien! And very good design! :D :tu: :tu:

The Namek
11-30-02, 06:43 AM
Nice work , MTB !!!
Are you going to texture her ?

zerobugetgamemaker
11-30-02, 07:50 AM
whooee! looking great MTB! :tu: are you going to texture her some?

David

Mahlikus The Black
11-30-02, 11:20 AM
Thanks yall! Yes I am going to texture her. Actually I have it set up to once I finish texturizing the pieces, I am going to MM them together. I am having a problem though...trying to decide on on either realism or toonshader style...hhmm..maybe both.
There will also be a vehicle behind her and a futuristic city scape.

Right now, I am working on the long leather gloves/hands, some lace trimmings, and a costume design for he top as well.

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Mahlikus The Black
12-01-02, 11:35 PM
Okay, here is an update.

Still need to model the folds in the gloves and some other finer details. Then I may finally start the moto and then the background scene.
http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1038814518sij.jpg

A really big close-up!

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1038815108lwz.jpg

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MrBraun
12-02-02, 12:31 AM
Really cool Michael!!! Well done !! I like more this girl!!! Have a telephone number ?? ;)
Well done buddy !!! :D :tu:

InvisibleGenie
12-02-02, 12:40 AM
I noticed a problem anatomically with her left leg, "the one in the front". It seems to dent inward on the inside and it just doesn't seem as smooth as it should be. You may have been trying to do something with the leather here, but it does look a bit off.

Mik
12-02-02, 04:11 AM
Progressing very nicely Mahlikus, some great props you've added there.
:tu: :tu: :tu: :tu: :)

Mahlikus The Black
12-03-02, 11:16 PM
Thank you all!

Here she is!!

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1038986166lbv.jpg

UNREALONE1
12-03-02, 11:59 PM
outstanding

MrBraun
12-04-02, 12:08 AM
Wauuu Michael !!! ;)
Well well done !!! :D :tu:
I see forward for other characters !!!
Way to go bud !!! :tu: :tu: :tu:

drjjwow
12-04-02, 12:15 AM
shes awesome looking.. you did a excellent job on this image.. my hat comes off to you...

e1
12-04-02, 12:15 AM
Hi,

I really like this. The body looks soft and round, while the fabric has really crisp lines to it.
I can imagine her smoking that cigarette. She probably has a quick smoke before going onstage.
The freckle texture works too!

s borg
12-04-02, 03:40 AM
wow.
she is gorgeous!
nice work.
the coloring and texturing take it to another level.
is she available for a date??? :)

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JOHNVQ3
12-04-02, 06:17 AM
:) Just a great alien, I like the texture and the gloves and boots are well modelled,nice work :tu: :tu:

Ron Harris
12-04-02, 07:35 AM
very nice job Mike..she reminds me of one of the alien chicks from a Miss Galaxy pageant on the old original Lost in Space series....very kewl idea and execution in z...keep on truckin :tu:

Rafael Hernandez
12-04-02, 12:48 PM
Great stuff Mike! Nice modeling. Good to see you doing full figures. Ain't Zspheres great? I just wish you would create a background for this lady.

Mahlikus The Black
12-04-02, 01:26 PM
Thank you all for the kind words.
No, she isnt available...SHE IS ALL MINE!
MWOAHAHAHAHAH!!!!
Her figure is a caricature of my wife's so you could say she's taken! ;)

I am going to make a background alright!

Let me spill it...The Image will me called Need a light?
It will have a very futuristic motorcycle just behind her and I am still planning on the immediate foreground. Background will look futuristic as well...I am thinking NeoTokyo, night time (so I can get some blues in the background)...lots of city lights too. This is going to take me a while but I fell its about time I made a full on Illustration.

I just now finish messing around with the tire/rim basic..might look like this when I am done...might not. I have never made anything like this before. I am going to have to pick apart Pix's ZCycle for inspiration...it took me over an hour alone to figure out how to get the tire the way I wanted...2 minutes for the rim...*blush*
Stay tuned yall..this is gonna be tons of fun!!! I know I'm having fun! :D :D :D

http://www2.zbrushcentral.com/zbc_uploads/user_image-1039037149egw.jpg

zerobugetgamemaker
12-04-02, 04:58 PM
great piece mtb! awesome details and up-closeness with the zspheres. :tu:

David

DeeVee
12-05-02, 05:22 AM
I waited a while before comenting on this ongoing project. IMHO you did an outstanding job and should be justifiably proud on your accomplishment.
Very well done! :) :D :tu: :tu: :tu: :tu:
DeeVee,
Joe.

ride4pride
12-05-02, 08:16 AM
She's hot, well hot. =D
Super sick work dude!
/Jim

juandel
12-05-02, 01:17 PM
a zooper cool project! love her freckles :D + a big bunch of :tu:s, mtb!

- juandel

Mentat7
12-06-02, 06:35 AM
Nice work on the modeling and nice smooth colors Mike. The cig looks out of place a little.....I think I liked the idea of a weapon better. :tu:

Mahlikus The Black
12-06-02, 07:42 AM
Thank you all for the wonderful comments.

Lonnie, do you mean out of place as in position or image content.
My wife places her arms as such when she is smoking outside and it starts getting cold..lol. So, you'll have to have word with her.. :P I think it might make more sense when it is all finished. We'll see. If not, well I can always remodel. :D

Once again, thanks everyone!

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Mentat7
12-06-02, 08:37 AM
I meant as in the cig didn't look right in the scene....something about aliens and leather jacket wearing alien gang members (inside joke) smoking and all just doesn't do it for me...but that is my tiny little insignificant opinion. :D

Mahlikus The Black
12-06-02, 08:48 AM
I see, and dude I value your opinion...just as much as everyone else and then some so thanks for the 121. :D
*Sigh* So she'd an Alien Gang bang'd hoochie mama hu?...damn Jackie's gonna be pissed...lol! ;) I dont think a gun would make her Martha Stewart..lol.

Ah but it could be a kickass gun!...and a badge...though where to put it...hhhmmmm *blush*

Thanks again.

PusGhetty
12-08-02, 02:19 AM
LoL @ the above post... MTB, you did fantastic so far, even better than I anticipated... I really like the new pose and clothing as well as everything else, man the textures are very sweet. It has a real nice comic cover look to it! She is one heck of an alien babe!! The cig works for me allthough I quit smoking about eight months ago after nearly twenty years of a pack a day. I'm only 31 dude! Makes me cough thinking about it! ;~) Anyways, I'm looking forward to your finished piece... should prove most excellent!
Michael