Please critique (Nudity)

[snakker]

Hi, this is my first finalized full body mesh on zbrush. I made the base mesh in silo using some reference. His right hand came out bad though.

Any critique is very welcome.

man small.jpg (http://javascript<b></b>:zb_insimg('49236','man%20small.jpg',1,0))

[javierloredo]

Hi!

I'll be very sincere with you here. The modeling looks pretty good. The muscle definition it's looking pretty good. Maybe you might want to post this model in a different position.

Few things I would suggest to take a look:
Look at all the negative space in this image. There is a big area of negative space between legs. Also, look at the direction the arms and the head are pointing to. Just by looking this small details, the first thing that I see when I look at this image it's the genitals. In my opinion, I think you could've posed him in a different pose having this simple concepts of desing in mind. In my opinion this image looks a little bit erotic.
Please, don't take this personal! This is my opinion with all respect.:)

Have a nice day!

Javier Loredo.

[Lead Balloon]

I agree, what exactly is this guy supposed to be doing?

[womball]

It looks like he's trying to carry an invisible tree trunk, which orginates from his crotch. I honestly can't see any guy doing this pose in real life. :rolleyes: :lol: Alright never mind about that.

The negative betweens his legs is not that bad, since its not even and not quiet a mirror pose. He should take up more of the frame though. Also you should be having some wrinkles in his skin where the joints are. You might have to pose nude yourself to accomplish this, to understand how the skin works. Fix the right hand too, so that the fingers aren't so drastically different. Did you not use a mirror modifier to model the base shape of the hand?

[Hysteria]

Snakker,

I like the pose though, it's a thing I'm working on also to give the head a sneaky way of looking. But to me this seems nothing more than a model produced by Poser?

What are you planning to do with it?

Mick

[Angelstein]

Heh, this initally made me laugh out loud! Not because it's bad or anything, but because he's obviously in a well known sex position, except the other person is not there, so it gives it a strange and slightly funny look.

Nice sculpting skills though mate :tu: