First Zspheres character, crit if you can

[LeoNp]

HI all,

Did this one today while watching a gnomon dvd by Alex Alvarez. It's great for me as I'm a non-techie. This character head is for a new Jester character. Finally understand hopping arount the D and shift+D levels and got those shortcuts on my WACOM. The ungly interface period is almost over. I'm beggining appreciate the program much more.

All ciritiques welcome. Let me know what could be done better.

First demo reel also needs crits www.chrisplatz.com (http://www.chrisplatz.com)

Jester_02.jpg

thnx,
Platz

[LeoNp]

Here is the paint up in Painter before I begin texturing. I'll probably post the costume and body next.

Jester_02painted.jpg

[Longsight]

good start, you might want to give the yes a bit more depth though. keep it up :)

[FilthUponYou]

good start, you can try using reference of older people for the wrinkles. i agree with Longsight about the eyes though, they look flat and lifeless. :tu: :tu: :cool: